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Your Guiding Light

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

I need your guiding light, To steer my soul, To its resting place of peace. A place within your heart, To keep me calm, Stilling anger's fierce release. The storm of life, Turned to gentle breeze, Would catch in Gaia's sail, And there would never be a time, Our love could not prevail.

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[7] Caducus 15-Nov-02/8:50 AM Reply
7, the last few lines, but it left me a bit cold