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Your Guiding Light (Free verse) by Bonehiss I need your guiding light,
To steer my soul,
To its resting place of peace.
A place within your heart,
To keep me calm,
Stilling anger's fierce release.
The storm of life,
Turned to gentle breeze,
Would catch in Gaia's sail,
And there would never be a time,
Our love could not prevail.
Up the ladder:
Shimmer of Tears
Down the ladder:
I Begged
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Posted: November 14, 2002 10:53 PM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2002 10:53 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9403987 Overall Rank: 9035 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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15-Nov-02/8:50 AM
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7, the last few lines, but it left me a bit cold
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