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give (Free verse) by joey
give a little give a lot it doesnt matter if you forgot when we cry its on our own but others give when your alone friends are there through thick and thin in competition they give so much to win in love giving is the best thing to do it mainly leads to them saying 'i love you' you give when your happy you give when your sad you give when your good you give when your bad apreciation is the best reward through life you will travel and never get bored whatever the feeling you have deep down inside someone will give you that escape from the lies dont cover it up the pain that you feel give someone the chance to make you feel real if someone has hurt you and your messed up in your head dont give them abuse but your friendship instead for giving can help you whenever your down it will give you smile instead of a frown give everyone the chance to see you for you dont lie to impress always be true

Up the ladder: Change of Address
Down the ladder: Lloyd Street Interlude

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9648
Posted: November 15, 2002 8:00 AM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2002 8:00 AM PST
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Comments:
[0] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 15-Nov-02/8:36 AM | Reply
This was as wet as a nun watching
Lesbian Swedish mud wrestlers.

Joey come on man you can do better
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Nov-02/11:32 AM | Reply
i hope your monkeys eat this too. does your mom know your diddling on line?
[n/a] joey @ 212.219.142.161 > horus8 | 21-Nov-02/12:59 AM | Reply
urmmmm, ok then!?!?!?!
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