Re: Confession by marvelis	1-Feb-03/4:50 AM
Reality is insanity it kills your belief in dreams, take a picture spill your wine, drown yourself in alkaline. that was my thought whilst reading this and dont ask me why. reactions are interesting when you read certain poems, this is good in my humble opinion however i do fear votes/comments will be split on this -8
Re: Life by marvelis	1-Feb-03/4:45 AM
There is no such word as gloriest, how about ..and the humblest. Not a great alternative but an apt decription, I'll think about it but i am trying to read as much today as possible on p/r -6-
Re: Dancers of the Night by Teen14	1-Feb-03/4:36 AM
pretty much agree with JC some nice imgery here, think the 1st 3 lines of the last stanza needs a re-edit, it kind of goes a bit off there but a good read
Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin	1-Feb-03/4:34 AM
My mate has a boa constrictor and keeps frozen rodents for his treats, this was one shaken martini --------------> 7
Re: Run Forest! Run... by Bachus	1-Feb-03/4:32 AM
you are mad...but funny too -7
Re: The Merry Man by Teen14	1-Feb-03/1:29 AM
pretty good but the line has the joy of a 1000 little boys and girls sent a shiver down my spine -7-
Re: a comment on Despair by Caducus	31-Jan-03/8:21 AM
bloody hell its not that difficult it means unable to stop himself taking his life.
Re: Elegy by Quarton	31-Jan-03/6:05 AM
you seem unblocked this aint too bad
Re: It's Over by Jigg	31-Jan-03/6:03 AM
add a chorus for you have something here maybe -7
Re: All I Feel by brokenwing	31-Jan-03/3:33 AM
that website is actually wrong its ...italatin.com/latin.html
Re: All I Feel by brokenwing	31-Jan-03/3:31 AM
look up 'interlunium' on the net its about the moon. there are some beautiful latin phrases for nature check them out her at...catholicarchives.nd.eu for translation of english to latin. for expample: falling = caducus beautiful = endymion (who was a beautiful young man loved by the moon). It may or may not give you a little inspiration. Please read tintagiles work hes a great poet who paints the scene enchantedly, i guarantee you'll like the one about the bare breasted maiden beneath the moonlight.
Re: All I Feel by brokenwing	31-Jan-03/3:27 AM
The Devil man said it all really. This is the best one i've read of yours its got a bit of imagery and reads quite well, by no means the finished article, was this written spontaneously? if so a re-write may be difficult without those emotions -7-
Re: Beauty, sleeping by Ranger	30-Jan-03/9:59 AM
After reading mucho of your stuff I find this has some choice lines but it needs to woven in parts, I will have a better look and vote tomorrow but imagine britney spears tits being covered up in a woolly jumper and you got this poem, you know the beautys there but you cant quite see it. Anyway apparently ranger we belong to a brit pack? gotta go or she'll be moody
Re: one moment to the other by nentwined	27-Jan-03/8:40 AM
todays best
Re: Snowblind by horus8	24-Jan-03/4:59 AM
Very cool. hey Horus this reminds me of Jim Morrissons poetry you should read it, this is in the same vein (retinal vein that is) *9*
Re: a comment on 9/11 tribute by Caducus	24-Jan-03/1:23 AM
Instead of angel how about mortal? on his way to heaven or some secular description
Re: a comment on 9/11 tribute by Caducus	24-Jan-03/1:21 AM
To ranger / tintagiles. Thanks for commenting on this. I cannot think how to modify the beard thing. Basically i read that a cirrus cloud is shaped like a beard and found the connection with osama, cirrus clouds also travel from east to west so the metaphor seemed relevent but i think i could use it a better way. I know your work well tintagiles, you work well with imagery please pass on any thoughts. Also if i get rid of the angels bit i may lose the poem. I will work on this over weekend.
Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8	23-Jan-03/5:36 AM
In every mosque, in every church i can smell the effigys of horus burning (even then we can feel the warmth, see the light) as muslims would say....ahh this is bloody lovely innit, My brother scitz hates haikus but he liked this one, horus your a naughty naughty boy. *9*
Re: Mystery by Katie2	23-Jan-03/2:40 AM
Raw piece, well done some striking images here and a good opening, last line dont work for me though-8
Re: The last day of an old year by poetandknowit	23-Jan-03/2:21 AM
I liked this the 1st time I read it and voted 10 heres that vote again, I will however study not glance your work from now now on. (my work is less demanding), we've had our differences but I respect you.