Re: Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand |
10-Feb-03/2:22 AM |
You have all your male chromosomes shining like icicles in the setting sun, for B movie appreciation you gotta read dark angels 'zombie flesh eaters' its a f***g party. -9-
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Re: Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand |
10-Feb-03/2:22 AM |
You have all your male chromosomes shining like icicles in the setting sun, for B movie appreciation you gotta read dark angels 'zombie flesh eaters' its a f***g party. -9-
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Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/2:06 AM |
iT CAN ACTUALLY BE INTERPRETED EACH WAY ON A 2ND PERUSAL, STOLEN SLEEP CAN BE SLEEPING OR NOT BEING ABLE TO
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Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/1:54 AM |
Fantastico ! but I think line 2 contradicts insomnia ?
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Re: a comment on The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus |
9-Feb-03/3:39 PM |
thanks z, pasting work is always crap with the grammar, what suggestions for eve of doom?
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Re: Pigeons by Limness |
7-Feb-03/9:13 AM |
This was well worth reading your writing is rich in imagination, and there i was expecting something crap (your title isn't alluring like the poem) *9*
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Re: a comment on **The Therapist** by scitz |
7-Feb-03/5:47 AM |
its scitz, zzinnia got your e mail and its a blast, thanx peanut !
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Re: Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones |
5-Feb-03/9:32 AM |
where for art thou 'mollusc king'? will there be more of that?
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Re: Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones |
5-Feb-03/9:31 AM |
an epic as usual but the 1st one of yours I took time to read and t'was worth the scrolling
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Re: the price of success by brazen |
5-Feb-03/9:18 AM |
apply your mask each day
to mimic every face in the sea
all you are is a pattern
carved out of your own misery
**best thing i read all day
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Re: the price of success by brazen |
5-Feb-03/9:17 AM |
I could really understand where you were coming from with this, its very good I like the point it makes about us all being 'fabric cyborgs' on the road to success with a free stopover at a town called failure. We do immerse ourselves in the plasma screens of misery and repetitiveness. This is groundhog day of pain, a head on collision resulting from death on the international highway on the road to hell, a million and one things can be said, sad very sad state of existence and you said it very well -10-
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Re: Mislead by PK |
5-Feb-03/9:13 AM |
nice poem but couldn't link what the title had to do with any of it.
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Re: The Long Walk Back by Jigg |
5-Feb-03/9:00 AM |
I imagined Olivier reading this with a skull in his hand, not a bad effort
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Re: Feeling by chicka_babe05 |
4-Feb-03/8:21 AM |
didnt kind of have the flow, bit too predictable. -5-
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Re: 42 by brazen |
4-Feb-03/8:20 AM |
42? my guess is this about the columbia but 42 wasnt the angle they were supposed to fly in at, put us all out of our misery as i will forget next week to re read it, liked it though but it would help to know why i liked it 7=
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Re: What the runes said by INTRANSIT |
4-Feb-03/8:17 AM |
liked the opening it really grabbed my attention and this ones a sticker. 8
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Re: An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Feb-03/2:28 AM |
Deliciously evil and offensive 8
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Re: Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit |
3-Feb-03/2:06 AM |
5th from last line, hmm I wonder why they do that, you cant buy being a nice person, as for the poem can you seriously expect me to believe that anyone under 16 would like this? and bla blah blah ( annoying isn't it when people are nasty and insulting without actually offering help, being pompous though isn't me I will leve that to u
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Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit |
3-Feb-03/1:59 AM |
and you have the gall to call my work bad, I wouldnt even wipe my ass on this boring shit
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Re: wanker by w~* ATHENA *~w |
1-Feb-03/4:55 AM |
geller is a pervert he is as bent as his spoons.
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