Comments byCaducus, 521–540 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand 10 Feb 2003, 2:22 AM
You have all your male chromosomes shining like icicles in the setting sun, for B movie appreciation you gotta read dark angels 'zombie flesh eaters' its a f***g party. -9-
on Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand 10 Feb 2003, 2:22 AM
You have all your male chromosomes shining like icicles in the setting sun, for B movie appreciation you gotta read dark angels 'zombie flesh eaters' its a f***g party. -9-
on nightly by <~> 10 Feb 2003, 2:06 AM
iT CAN ACTUALLY BE INTERPRETED EACH WAY ON A 2ND PERUSAL, STOLEN SLEEP CAN BE SLEEPING OR NOT BEING ABLE TO
on nightly by <~> 10 Feb 2003, 1:54 AM
Fantastico ! but I think line 2 contradicts insomnia ?
replying on The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus 9 Feb 2003, 3:39 PM
thanks z, pasting work is always crap with the grammar, what suggestions for eve of doom?
on Pigeons by Limness 7 Feb 2003, 9:13 AM
This was well worth reading your writing is rich in imagination, and there i was expecting something crap (your title isn't alluring like the poem) *9*
replying on **The Therapist** by scitz 7 Feb 2003, 5:47 AM
its scitz, zzinnia got your e mail and its a blast, thanx peanut !
on Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones 5 Feb 2003, 9:32 AM
where for art thou 'mollusc king'? will there be more of that?
on Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones 5 Feb 2003, 9:31 AM
an epic as usual but the 1st one of yours I took time to read and t'was worth the scrolling
on the price of success by brazen 5 Feb 2003, 9:18 AM
apply your mask each day
to mimic every face in the sea
all you are is a pattern
carved out of your own misery

**best thing i read all day
on the price of success by brazen 5 Feb 2003, 9:17 AM
I could really understand where you were coming from with this, its very good I like the point it makes about us all being 'fabric cyborgs' on the road to success with a free stopover at a town called failure. We do immerse ourselves in the plasma screens of misery and repetitiveness. This is groundhog day of pain, a head on collision resulting from death on the international highway on the road to hell, a million and one things can be said, sad very sad state of existence and you said it very well -10-
on Mislead by PK 5 Feb 2003, 9:13 AM
nice poem but couldn't link what the title had to do with any of it.
on The Long Walk Back by Jigg 5 Feb 2003, 9:00 AM
I imagined Olivier reading this with a skull in his hand, not a bad effort
on Feeling by chicka_babe05 4 Feb 2003, 8:21 AM
didnt kind of have the flow, bit too predictable. -5-
on 42 by brazen 4 Feb 2003, 8:20 AM
42? my guess is this about the columbia but 42 wasnt the angle they were supposed to fly in at, put us all out of our misery as i will forget next week to re read it, liked it though but it would help to know why i liked it 7=
on What the runes said by INTRANSIT 4 Feb 2003, 8:17 AM
liked the opening it really grabbed my attention and this ones a sticker. 8
on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4 Feb 2003, 2:28 AM
Deliciously evil and offensive 8
on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit 3 Feb 2003, 2:06 AM
5th from last line, hmm I wonder why they do that, you cant buy being a nice person, as for the poem can you seriously expect me to believe that anyone under 16 would like this? and bla blah blah ( annoying isn't it when people are nasty and insulting without actually offering help, being pompous though isn't me I will leve that to u
on setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit 3 Feb 2003, 1:59 AM
and you have the gall to call my work bad, I wouldnt even wipe my ass on this boring shit
on wanker by w~* ATHENA *~w 1 Feb 2003, 4:55 AM
geller is a pervert he is as bent as his spoons.