| Re: The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485 |
6-Nov-03/7:09 AM |
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full marks fo rthe use of gobbledygook
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| Re: Fathers by amielou82 |
6-Nov-03/7:05 AM |
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just when i started liking it i hated the next line and so on and so on- bit too preachy and a warm earl grey.
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| Re: God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Nov-03/7:02 AM |
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put a dash between k and mart for the english - we just think kmart is NYC street slang otherwise.
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| Re: God bless your stool plop by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
6-Nov-03/7:01 AM |
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| Re: Tiddles Breathes his Last by scitz |
29-Oct-03/9:24 AM |
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| Re: Nothing beat the 90's for An over view of American culture by Shardik |
25-Oct-03/3:46 AM |
blue collar beaten. 1st half was real ass kicker.
please help me with syllable's h ! and read my haiku just posted. i have the ideas but understand women more than syllables.
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| Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit |
25-Oct-03/3:45 AM |
My thoughts are more like drop and splash.
I cracked up when i saw it because for a moment i thought it would be your life story.
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| Re: falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa |
24-Oct-03/6:40 AM |
poemranker support : 9
You're a leader richard
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| Re: An Ode to the cat fish head helmet on your penis by horus8 |
15-Oct-03/1:33 AM |
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I have seen these bastards in the cinema and felt like sliting there throats with the stale popcorn they sell. On my last visit to the Odeon I heard someone groaning and told them to shut the fuck up, on my exit i realized the person i shouted at was in a wheelchair - still fair treatment to all lol.
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| Re: Turncoat by poetandknowit |
14-Oct-03/3:31 PM |
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Please explain the last 2 lines.
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| Re: Battle of the brains by INTRANSIT |
14-Oct-03/3:29 PM |
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Wow shorter than a haiku and speaking as loud with less - impressed - maybe we could have a new category called >>>>>>>>> Shorts 8
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| Re: Birdcalls by poetandknowit |
14-Oct-03/3:26 PM |
Loved the way you wrapped up S1 with the last 4 lines, speaks volumes about family values, appreciation of nature over social disdain.
Just one of those poems i want to read as i get something from it.
The last one of your poems was partly responsible for my poem 'Brighton Beach' i would appreciate your views on it good or bad.....Please.
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| Re: sex sex sex! by FreeFormFixation |
10-Oct-03/9:04 AM |
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if you add the word no between each of the words in the title you would have written a short poem about my life.
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
10-Oct-03/9:02 AM |
In parts a similar vein to Tintagiles stuff - that can't be bad.
Lose the line about the blue collar sleeps as only we who know you know that.
Ahh unless of course your pajamas have blue lapelles - but you strike me as going 'commando' when u sleep.
Just don't ask me why i think these disturbing thoughts.
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| Re: a comment on Never Love A Poet by Caducus |
9-Oct-03/10:20 AM |
I'm fine my blue collared beat bud ! Its national poetry day in England today and i am off to blow the dust off a few slap heads with some of more upbeat work. Funny aint it, how on national poetry day nobody at the library knew? This is the birthplace pf Phillip Larkin and nobody knew in the library.
I will e-mail you soon m8 !
Let the shenanigans begin !
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| Re: Making Bread by Shardik |
9-Oct-03/8:54 AM |
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Yep ! sure floured my apron
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| Re: the meeting by richa |
9-Oct-03/8:50 AM |
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| Re: Erect Tongue of Excite by LuckyJoe |
9-Oct-03/8:48 AM |
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| Re: Erect Tongue of Excite by LuckyJoe |
9-Oct-03/8:48 AM |
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the poem bites but the title sucks like a long distance lover 6
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| Re: Ecohippie by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
9-Oct-03/8:32 AM |
i so cracked up at the last 2 lines of S4.
very modest but my mark sir is not - 8
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