on Be Not Afraid Of Dying. by Mr Pig
12 May 2003, 8:09 AM
not your best but still good and a message of hope that i liked 8
on Taliban Ambush by scitz
5 Jun 2003, 9:04 AM
Fine
on Pale Blue Horizon by tranceformer
24 Apr 2003, 9:20 AM
Cool, liked it.
8
8
on Jenny Jones, Jenny Jones by bondjedi
24 Apr 2003, 9:11 AM
Yeah get rid of babydaddy, otherwise a bit of a cult scrawl 7
on Ode to a cock muncher by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
1 Jul 2003, 8:26 AM
God this has changed my life more than you will ever know, its really really really REALLY good.
(this really touched my delete button)
(this really touched my delete button)
on Hot Potato by Shardik
20 Jun 2003, 1:47 AM
YYYYYYep ! that'll get rid of em ! 8
on some deleted poem
20 Jun 2003, 1:49 AM
Mature piece well done
on and love, an envy by richa
20 Jun 2003, 1:50 AM
her soil warm lips !
mmmmm
What a beautiful description 8
mmmmm
What a beautiful description 8
on some deleted poem
14 May 2003, 5:37 AM
Looking back I think if I would have just said wanker, that would have done it.
(now then will you copy and paste this now)
(now then will you copy and paste this now)
Black and white inspiration - photos - always so much more enamouring than color. This is a long poem from you I like its relaxed narrative telling a story from a vantage point of perspective coming alive from the 'phone call' which is where this poem to me became quite moving. Your prize is ...8
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
24 Apr 2003, 8:19 AM
I got a love/hate thing going on with this, hmmm
on underwater by tranceformer
24 Apr 2003, 9:13 AM
leda is right, it starts strong then gave me a major headfuck
on The Widow by e1ementfire
24 Apr 2003, 9:14 AM
a real mixed bag here, liked the spider connotation(s) but it seems in parts redundant of meaning.6
on I am a dream by mozac
24 Apr 2003, 9:17 AM
Good Execution, and the explanation helped.
Eyes on you. 8
Eyes on you. 8
on Staying Sane by ThoughtfulSoul
24 Apr 2003, 9:31 AM
Are you plasticgirlwithgun? Where is plasticgirlwithgun I miss that posh forked tongue.
This makes you sound a bit pathetic, insanity is recommended for anyone on ranker, see you in the canteen with angelina and winona and we'll smoke a bleeding fist over processed tuna and big momma.
This makes you sound a bit pathetic, insanity is recommended for anyone on ranker, see you in the canteen with angelina and winona and we'll smoke a bleeding fist over processed tuna and big momma.
on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
23 Apr 2003, 8:58 AM
With exception to that poem about you ripping the guts from the clock, this is your best, highly deserving all the praise. I've read 2 brilliant poems today and before thats spoiled I am logging off - 10 Cest Parfait
on some deleted poem
25 Apr 2003, 2:26 AM
you crack me up
on Continuation by baughworm
14 May 2003, 9:03 AM
A vivid, classy poem big on imagery and very flow like. 9