Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT	23-Apr-03/8:58 AM
With exception to that poem about you ripping the guts from the clock, this is your best, highly deserving all the praise. I've read 2 brilliant poems today and before thats spoiled I am logging off - 10 Cest Parfait
Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	24-Apr-03/8:19 AM
I got a love/hate thing going on with this, hmmm
Re: Jenny Jones, Jenny Jones by bondjedi	24-Apr-03/9:11 AM
Yeah get rid of babydaddy, otherwise a bit of a cult scrawl 7
Re: underwater by tranceformer	24-Apr-03/9:13 AM
leda is right, it starts strong then gave me a major headfuck
Re: The Widow by e1ementfire	24-Apr-03/9:14 AM
a real mixed bag here, liked the spider connotation(s) but it seems in parts redundant of meaning.6
Re: I am a dream by mozac	24-Apr-03/9:17 AM
Good Execution, and the explanation helped. Eyes on you. 8
Re: Pale Blue Horizon by tranceformer	24-Apr-03/9:20 AM
Cool, liked it. 8
Re: almost by wordho	24-Apr-03/9:26 AM
Interesting choice of subject but dealt with heavy handedly.Define what you are saying with more originality you must compete with the subject and make it a little more engaging. Liked the lines 1-6, (6
Re: Staying Sane by ThoughtfulSoul	24-Apr-03/9:31 AM
Are you plasticgirlwithgun? Where is plasticgirlwithgun I miss that posh forked tongue. This makes you sound a bit pathetic, insanity is recommended for anyone on ranker, see you in the canteen with angelina and winona and we'll smoke a bleeding fist over processed tuna and big momma.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Apr-03/2:26 AM
you crack me up
Re: Released by INTRANSIT	28-Apr-03/8:56 AM
Black and white inspiration - photos - always so much more enamouring than color. This is a long poem from you I like its relaxed narrative telling a story from a vantage point of perspective coming alive from the 'phone call' which is where this poem to me became quite moving. Your prize is ...8
Re: Be Not Afraid Of Dying. by Mr Pig	12-May-03/8:09 AM
not your best but still good and a message of hope that i liked 8
regarding some deleted poem...	14-May-03/5:37 AM
Looking back I think if I would have just said wanker, that would have done it. (now then will you copy and paste this now)
Re: Continuation by baughworm	14-May-03/9:03 AM
A vivid, classy poem big on imagery and very flow like. 9
Re: Timing by INTRANSIT	27-May-03/3:47 PM
loved it 10
Re: Taliban Ambush by scitz	5-Jun-03/9:04 AM
Fine
Re: Hot Potato by Shardik	20-Jun-03/1:47 AM
YYYYYYep ! that'll get rid of em ! 8
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jun-03/1:49 AM
Mature piece well done
Re: and love, an envy by richa	20-Jun-03/1:50 AM
her soil warm lips ! mmmmm What a beautiful description 8
Re: Ode to a cock muncher by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	1-Jul-03/8:26 AM
God this has changed my life more than you will ever know, its really really really REALLY good. (this really touched my delete button)