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Free verse № 47840

Pale Blue Horizon

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Apr 2003 · 1 comment

Gazing at the Glacier World Which lies above our own Silky soft seas Stretching for eternity For time does not exist Once one can rise above the mist And as the Ice-land breaks The peaceful light escapes And takes a second breath Just a second to refresh And watch the fluid skies To see the rainbow rise Let its glow hypnotize You right before your very eyes Like majestic misty mountains Stretched across the open fountain Just within one's reach Close enough to hear Her speak Quiet words of sacred peace She says Her wisdom lies in The Pale Blue Horizon

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[8] Caducus 24-Apr-03/9:20 AM Reply
Cool, liked it.
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