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Free verse № 47838

underwater

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Apr 2003 · 1 comment

underwater he smiled broke bread a healthy trial we fed for awhile red red red pure color bled you said another dead one more fell none foretell the time of dawn when underwater Strikes the Surface... Lightning Electric is projected When we intersected We connected fatal not the fable taught a fable the able-thought unstable resting in the CRADLE Rock Away Rock Away The Lost Decay Rock Away

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[6] Caducus 24-Apr-03/9:13 AM Reply
leda is right, it starts strong then gave me a major headfuck