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underwater (Free verse) by tranceformer
underwater he smiled broke bread a healthy trial we fed for awhile red red red pure color bled you said another dead one more fell none foretell the time of dawn when underwater Strikes the Surface... Lightning Electric is projected When we intersected We connected fatal not the fable taught a fable the able-thought unstable resting in the CRADLE Rock Away Rock Away The Lost Decay Rock Away

Up the ladder: isms and ities
Down the ladder: Life Like This

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10110
Posted: April 23, 2003 10:08 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2003 10:08 PM PDT
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[6] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 24-Apr-03/9:13 AM | Reply
leda is right, it starts strong then gave me a major headfuck
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