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Life Like This

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 May 2003 · 1 comment

How can we live life like this? Knowing there will never be any bliss Never seeing things in the light And trying hard to fight The pain that keeps us awake Slithering through you like a torturous snake Know that soon it will come to an end To you my soul I will lend Keep it close to you and never let it get away For if it does there will be a never-ending pain I say Drag it through the dirt Be sure to make it hurt Let it see yes let it see Make it suffer like it had done to me Soon it will be no more And every one can stop being a whore So put it through the never ending pain And yes bring down the rain.

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[6] deleted user 22-May-03/3:42 AM Reply
hopefully you will find your bliss...its a pretty good peom..-6-