Replying to a comment on:

underwater (Free verse) by tranceformer

underwater he smiled broke bread a healthy trial we fed for awhile red red red pure color bled you said another dead one more fell none foretell the time of dawn when underwater Strikes the Surface... Lightning Electric is projected When we intersected We connected fatal not the fable taught a fable the able-thought unstable resting in the CRADLE Rock Away Rock Away The Lost Decay Rock Away

Caducus 24-Apr-03/9:13 AM
leda is right, it starts strong then gave me a major headfuck




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001