regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jan-05/10:24 AM
P.K. Dick lives!
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Jan-05/8:57 AM
I think you misspelled "pppp9ooooi88i77uuu'-'yuy677777777775666 666 666 666 666. -10-
Re: Enlightenment by Dovina	20-Jan-05/8:02 AM
Way to go, Dovina. The only queen America bows to these days is George Michaels. Kick the Brits ass.
Re: black dog by wilco	21-Jan-05/8:44 AM
Of course it sounds like it's about doggie roadkill but even if it isn't...-10- Good.
Re: I Win. by LintyWeenis	21-Jan-05/8:40 PM
It's irreverant in a good way.-9- I'd give it a ten except that because of the last line I did a google seach and found no "Church of LintyWeenis." I guess it must be an Amish sect(No computers allowed)?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jan-05/5:13 AM
With all its tension, there is something very stable about the image of a turnbuckle. There's a balance and also an importance to the job that is done by the turnbuckle as it holds together two things desperate to fly apart. My poem on the same subject is about a different tool-- the Rack. I love a poem about a babe with a good rack.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jan-05/5:19 AM
Especially as the poems get older.
Re: Reasons by dancin_n_da_moonlite	24-Jan-05/5:21 AM
Sounds like it could be a Green Day song.
Re: UFO by Dovina	24-Jan-05/5:27 AM
Another world invaded another sci-fi x-file for the inhabitants of Titan.
Re: Feudal Conflict by Dovina	24-Jan-05/4:29 PM
Gee Dovina, around L.A. the queens slay as they lay with their own holey men.
Re: Memphis Skyline by wilco	25-Jan-05/7:48 PM
Good lyric. The line "sitting on the banks" makes me wonder if it should be "sitting on the bank." I don't know if Memphis has several rivers with banks upon which to sit or a river with one bank and another on the other side. Still, I like it-9-.
Re: "I" became "We" by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	26-Jan-05/7:38 AM
Never give up. God's got sumpthang, etc. -8-
Re: Girly by Dovina	6-Feb-05/9:57 AM
I really like this poem. It is very light-hearted with much sarcasm. I believe the last four lines would be better re-arranged as follows: "but I’m better off girly than a poetess, surely this poem of mine doesn't seem to rhyme" It puts the heavy-handed "girly conclusion" inside the poem and makes the end a "typically girly" comment(in the sacastic sense in which you write about the subject of girliness).
Re: The Man I Love by Dovina	16-Feb-05/12:10 AM
This poem is sweeter than Splenda.-10-
Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman	16-Feb-05/12:14 AM
As a man trapped in a woman's body, I must confess that you are right. -10-
Re: Pillow Talk by horus8	16-Feb-05/12:18 AM
May I count to 100 by -10-'s?
Re: Piercings by PsydewaysTears	16-Feb-05/12:27 AM
I liked the concept and the twist at the end. Some rhymes could have been a bit "weirder" in keeping with the subject, for example: Some people pierce "down under" below the waist; above the knees. Wait a minute! Does that make it sound like an Australian piercing? Your poem works for me. -9-
Re: Hunger by Dovina	20-Feb-05/10:03 PM
What means "up utensils I indulge in" or "me a plate of food?" I guess you can't start reading just anywhere and have it make sense. However, in some African countries or on a plane wreck in the Andes, "me a plate of food" does work.
Re: Summing Up by Dovina	20-Feb-05/10:05 PM
Nicely put.
Re: Advertising says: by Dovina	2-Mar-05/8:44 AM
You are at your best when you do the math. The feeling I get from this poem is “Ennui and TV.”