on OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer
13 Dec 2006, 9:30 AM
it's really a good example for new structure poetry
on some deleted poem
28 Sep 2005, 10:19 PM
not bad ..keep going on as u said ...let it .
on A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina
28 Sep 2005, 10:30 PM
yeah i feel it ...u are right feeling misplaced not made for this world ...the grieving beauty of ur poem made me ocean of emotion cant be rest
on some deleted poem
13 Oct 2005, 6:05 PM
sitting with darkness
talking to sadness
holding emptiness
caressing hoplessness
feeling placeless
dying in the bed of forgetfulness
talking to sadness
holding emptiness
caressing hoplessness
feeling placeless
dying in the bed of forgetfulness
on Privacy Compromised by Dovina
24 Dec 2005, 12:01 PM
my admiration to this poems slipped hints of mine
i want to depict the gothic princess as the modern poet..
i want to depict the gothic princess as the modern poet..
on Faceless agonies by Prince of Void
27 Dec 2005, 11:56 AM
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on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void
30 Dec 2005, 1:06 AM
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on Romans 8:28 by amanda_dcosta
30 Dec 2005, 1:23 AM
this is a poem as i love to read
it's faith inside what i live for
the poem made love
it's faith inside what i live for
the poem made love
on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil
30 Dec 2005, 3:45 AM
u are right ...we dont need to follow rules of past ..we made rules ..that's art ...it must face changes if changes are against past ..
on ghost host by elderking
31 Dec 2005, 10:58 AM
ur poem has haunted my mind like a ghost ..good job
on Claim to Call by MacFrantic
2 Jan 2006, 12:37 PM
silence of memories haunted ur poem ...nice job
on The Fragile silhouette of me by Prince of Void
7 Jan 2006, 12:43 AM
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on Do 20 always make this poem sense? by Prince of Void
15 Jan 2006, 7:39 AM
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on May I Help by Dovina
23 Jan 2006, 10:18 AM
I love how you drew me thorogh the joy of poetry
that's beauty goes to my heart..and I contact ur feelings are restless thorough ur poems
that's beauty goes to my heart..and I contact ur feelings are restless thorough ur poems
on Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised] by Y2kSlamPoet
27 Nov 2006, 10:37 AM
it's good ..and keep going on this way ..don't trun it into other ways
on Advent by Nicholas Jones
16 Dec 2006, 9:17 AM
I was sleeping and being comforted
By a cool breeze, when suddenly a grey dove
From a thicket sang and sobbed with longing
And reminded me of my own passion
I had been away from my own soul so long
So late-sleeping .but thatâs doveâs crying
Woke me and made me cry, praise
To all early-walking believer
By a cool breeze, when suddenly a grey dove
From a thicket sang and sobbed with longing
And reminded me of my own passion
I had been away from my own soul so long
So late-sleeping .but thatâs doveâs crying
Woke me and made me cry, praise
To all early-walking believer
That was great ...soon i will share one of my experiences...
I had faced a homeless better to say he was placeless in this world.
They live where this world lost so long...
So late-meeting but I'm feeling in this way...
Their actions ask how do whys become void?
The void makes them homeless in the hopeless shape...
the shapes of their hearts make all differences
he shoud know he's running out of time
open up, surrender to the plot
when a cold wind blew on this day
we looked the other way
tomorrow we might find
the answers lay in riverbeds and dust
we believed sth beyond the beauty and order
our great city of vision lost in this beautiful choas
open up, surrender to the plot
when a cold wind blew on this day
we looked the other way
tomorrow we might find
the answers lay in riverbeds and dust
we believed sth beyond the beauty and order
our great city of vision lost in this beautiful choas