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28-Sep-05/10:19 PM |
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not bad ..keep going on as u said ...let it .
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| Re: A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina |
28-Sep-05/10:30 PM |
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yeah i feel it ...u are right feeling misplaced not made for this world ...the grieving beauty of ur poem made me ocean of emotion cant be rest
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13-Oct-05/6:05 PM |
sitting with darkness
talking to sadness
holding emptiness
caressing hoplessness
feeling placeless
dying in the bed of forgetfulness
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| Re: Privacy Compromised by Dovina |
24-Dec-05/12:01 PM |
my admiration to this poems slipped hints of mine
i want to depict the gothic princess as the modern poet..
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| Re: Faceless agonies by Prince of Void |
27-Dec-05/11:56 AM |
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| Re: when i met sky alone by Prince of Void |
30-Dec-05/1:06 AM |
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| Re: Romans 8:28 by amanda_dcosta |
30-Dec-05/1:23 AM |
this is a poem as i love to read
it's faith inside what i live for
the poem made love
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| Re: I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil |
30-Dec-05/3:45 AM |
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u are right ...we dont need to follow rules of past ..we made rules ..that's art ...it must face changes if changes are against past ..
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| Re: ghost host by elderking |
31-Dec-05/10:58 AM |
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ur poem has haunted my mind like a ghost ..good job
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| Re: Claim to Call by MacFrantic |
2-Jan-06/12:37 PM |
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silence of memories haunted ur poem ...nice job
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| Re: The Fragile silhouette of me by Prince of Void |
7-Jan-06/12:43 AM |
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| Re: Do 20 always make this poem sense? by Prince of Void |
15-Jan-06/7:39 AM |
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| Re: May I Help by Dovina |
23-Jan-06/10:18 AM |
I love how you drew me thorogh the joy of poetry
that's beauty goes to my heart..and I contact ur feelings are restless thorough ur poems
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| Re: Goldmunds Slut Fiasco v.2 [Revised] by Y2kSlamPoet |
27-Nov-06/10:37 AM |
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it's good ..and keep going on this way ..don't trun it into other ways
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| Re: OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer |
13-Dec-06/9:30 AM |
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it's really a good example for new structure poetry
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| Re: Advent by Nicholas Jones |
16-Dec-06/9:17 AM |
I was sleeping and being comforted
By a cool breeze, when suddenly a grey dove
From a thicket sang and sobbed with longing
And reminded me of my own passion
I had been away from my own soul so long
So late-sleeping .but thatâs doveâs crying
Woke me and made me cry, praise
To all early-walking believer
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| Re: Homeless by Dovina |
16-Dec-06/9:36 AM |
That was great ...soon i will share one of my experiences...
I had faced a homeless better to say he was placeless in this world.
They live where this world lost so long...
So late-meeting but I'm feeling in this way...
Their actions ask how do whys become void?
The void makes them homeless in the hopeless shape...
the shapes of their hearts make all differences
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| Re: Cloche. by howl |
31-Dec-06/8:48 AM |
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keep going on ..it's very cinematic
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| Re: Fanatic by Dovina |
31-Dec-06/9:04 AM |
he shoud know he's running out of time
open up, surrender to the plot
when a cold wind blew on this day
we looked the other way
tomorrow we might find
the answers lay in riverbeds and dust
we believed sth beyond the beauty and order
our great city of vision lost in this beautiful choas
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| Re: Fury by wilco |
15-Jan-07/7:26 AM |
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Good job ..it's a great poem
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