Re: Bitter by Ranger	31-Jan-07/8:36 AM
all the ghosts... all the ghosts... made my vote your mind is happy butI'm telling you you should learn to let it go
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	25-Feb-07/4:36 AM
ur poems are adventures in the world of shit all condoms that you used in this wasteland it's no more uselful like ur cyber-shit that make u think that u are the most talented so slowly open your eyes to the entwined world that contains no more shit
Re: Firestorm by Dovina	25-Feb-07/8:16 AM
I’m far away from the claws of the dark city I’m heading to the firestorm And the summer wind tries to creep beside me I’m going slowly against the sitting sun My eyes will be the flame of a candle The Candle burn at both ends I’m pursuing the best ends By my beginning knows my end However I’m crossing the horizons of Mysterious silence It’s more like outlook of my life
Re: looking for by Phalkon	25-Feb-07/9:51 AM
before my pen pin down what's in my head I had stared at darkness it holds all paths for the peace it carry me away from the cybernetic world to the timeless place as i'm looking for the point on the pointless ocean i could be placeless evermore
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Mar-07/11:40 AM
I hate abomination For taking an action To have sex With the fatal attraction Made the son of sins Being the Holy Father Above land of crosses And for the sexual obsessions I’ll carry the cross on my shoulder For son and father Fucking each other For the holy ghost
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Mar-07/11:40 AM
I hate abomination For taking an action To have sex With the fatal attraction Made the son of sins Being the Holy Father Above land of crosses And for the sexual obsessions I’ll carry the cross on my shoulder For son and father Fucking each other For the holy ghost
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Mar-07/8:01 AM
" u dont know what u are talking about do u ? " everyone is a good storyteller ..what's big deal ? fellow
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Mar-07/10:15 AM
That’s the way it is We are on the mission To achieve what we shoud achieve For achieving we want to do anything Like that Happiness is that we do whatever it takes To achieve something at the end Even we dont know it works or not Afterwards we are still where we stay and we die
Re: it's the different kind of a poem by Prince of Void	31-Mar-07/11:31 AM
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Re: it's the different kind of a poem by Prince of Void	2-Apr-07/10:17 AM
portray happiness words allegory worlds a new dawn our minds oceans inside emptiness and nothingness all memories behind the breeze a brave new world dot.cybernetic wasteland
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Apr-07/9:16 AM
Tasting flavorless.. ,being hopelessly in love. my dying bride numbness in the pathless heart
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Apr-07/9:24 AM
it was good ...
Re: Monsters by MacFrantic	3-Apr-07/9:31 AM
monsters ..it's a good choice of title
Re: Monsters by MacFrantic	3-Apr-07/9:34 AM
monstrocity...
Re: We… by Prince of Void	8-Apr-07/11:01 AM
I found myself alone in skies Where the insanity blinds eyes When I am a king of misjudgments There is nowhere to hide my jealousy I’m drowning in doubts of “whys” As I’m lost within frustrations I’m dying from this agony To stage of the powerful play The play’s a tragedy of dreams
Re: you've returned i'm glad by richa	9-Apr-07/9:54 AM
The poem’s been written by you It is full of happiness in the sweet misery of past but the melody of music altered your life As your life lingers on but you are still wondering about the season that enchanted you for years Years had faced you harsh and now it’s time to let it go and think that the reasons of those happenings Will be lost in the moment that you found something invaluable that he or she never understand...So if they fall...Nothing happen you no longer need his or her distraction.
Re: 1982 County Stadium by jessicazee	27-Apr-07/5:21 AM
it's a good poem 7
Re: Altitude by half.italian	1-May-07/1:59 PM
Poems are made by us One of us shall see What we paint Upon the blank page That depicts what shall be unseen In the heart of meanings When the heart is pathless When no poem shall go uncommented Where poems and oceans cross each other In the horizon of poets' dreams
Re: the play is a tragedy of dreams by Prince of Void	14-Jun-07/12:42 PM
the void filled my empty space's commet do i really deserve such zero in this zero effected life ...i dont deserve it ...
Re: leaves of clover by lmp	14-Jun-07/12:49 PM
thx for ur comments on my poems ur poems lies in the bed of subconsciousness so this green fields of ur dreams have drowned emotions and waken up the soul to find the mirror of the existence it really helps me if u add comments on my poems