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Faceless agonies (Other) by Prince of Void Faceless agonies of life in the depth of-
Field of sorrow
Upon the bridge of death
To pathless- ness of my heart
Up the ladder:
The world today.
Down the ladder:
The Theft of Woe
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Posted: December 27, 2005 11:56 AM PST; Last modified: December 27, 2005 11:56 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9586 Comments:
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27-Dec-05/11:56 AM
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May I suggest that you have inadvertently written a happy, optimistic poem? A pathless heart is the easiest kind to love, the most adaptable, the most able to join another heart.
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