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Faceless agonies (Other) by Prince of Void

Faceless agonies of life in the depth of- Field of sorrow Upon the bridge of death To pathless- ness of my heart

Dovina 27-Dec-05/12:01 PM
May I suggest that you have inadvertently written a happy, optimistic poem? A pathless heart is the easiest kind to love, the most adaptable, the most able to join another heart.




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