on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
9 Oct 2002, 1:35 PM
jubilant and detached and arrogant enough to possess a certain innocence. odd.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
9 Oct 2002, 1:36 PM
perhaps the truth does not lie at all. check the eye of the beholder
on Safe haven by INTRANSIT
28 Apr 2003, 8:44 AM
late toilet paper?
did you left-hand it?
did you left-hand it?
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
28 Apr 2003, 1:26 PM
how about velevted blood?
instead of beautiful?
instead of beautiful?
on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah
3 Mar 2003, 11:44 AM
you are gay.
on Head and Shoulders by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Jan 2003, 9:54 AM
tea tree shampoo? or something a little more violet?
on -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker
15 Jan 2003, 3:58 PM
my favorite part was when my eyes stopped bleeding. or when it ended. both were kinda stimulating, tho
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 3:42 PM
the last line feels jilted of a few beats. other than that--much, much nicer. still sways sing-songily, but is much cleaner.
on oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~>
18 Oct 2002, 7:06 PM
this is a joke, right? or some sort of less-than-slow descent into madness?
on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
9 Oct 2002, 1:39 PM
just don't beat her when you think she flirts with someone 5 years down the road, mm-k?
on Fetish Section by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 12:52 PM
Why don't you bring their kids into the store to do a little shopping? Better yet! Why not make your own video, and sell it in the store--then you could love them and hate them all in one felt swoop!
on The right one by dngrules
9 Oct 2002, 1:41 PM
sure it will.
on The Washing by strider1
9 Oct 2002, 1:42 PM
what a controlling fuck. washing machines turn themselves off.
on Dilemma of a Crip by Ninoy_Instigator
9 Oct 2002, 1:37 PM
get the fuck out, or die.