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Head and Shoulders (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
Feel that tingling? That's your scalp becoming... addicted to it.

Up the ladder: Return to Kadath
Down the ladder: Pass the salt, Peter

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Weighted score: 5.974745
Overall Rank: 1343
Posted: January 20, 2003 8:44 PM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2003 8:44 PM PST
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[9] JakeBike @ 167.206.181.179 | 21-Jan-03/9:54 AM | Reply
tea tree shampoo? or something a little more violet?
[8] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.41 | 21-Jan-03/1:37 PM | Reply
Holy Shit! I'd believe it. I also heard that anti-dandruff shampoo causes baldness.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > razorgrin | 21-Jan-03/2:01 PM | Reply
Ah ha. you totally got it. yeah, it's really weird, it goes with the theory..you never need or want it, until you've tried it.
[7] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.66.6 | 23-May-03/10:49 AM | Reply
its the acid they put in it, eating away at your skin like chemlawn does to dandelions.
[7] [mojo] @ 80.58.44.109 | 21-Apr-05/12:08 AM | Reply
Intriguing. Menthol shampoo or one of those wire devices?
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