on Regrets by Mikius
28 Apr 2003, 3:29 PM
please change the title to 'Advice from Damocles'.
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
28 Apr 2003, 1:26 PM
how about velevted blood?
instead of beautiful?
instead of beautiful?
on Safe haven by INTRANSIT
28 Apr 2003, 8:44 AM
late toilet paper?
did you left-hand it?
did you left-hand it?
replying on Man In A Street by kalikopeli
10 Apr 2003, 1:28 PM
take up self-censorship.
replying on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah
3 Mar 2003, 1:25 PM
Is it giving away trade secrets if you let me in?
on Fetish Section by vito0090
3 Mar 2003, 12:52 PM
Why don't you bring their kids into the store to do a little shopping? Better yet! Why not make your own video, and sell it in the store--then you could love them and hate them all in one felt swoop!
replying on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah
3 Mar 2003, 12:40 PM
i see.
2--giving, of course.
2--giving, of course.
I never laugh. i seethe quietly. except when my trousers are belted as you suggest. i do enjoy that. immensely. sometimes, i even put a rubber dog toy into my tighty-whities, to exponentialize my joy. too bad you like porn chicks. we could've had some fun. but i shall not ride the bang bus, for love or money, and i see you are a fan.
replying on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah
3 Mar 2003, 12:15 PM
2 questions:
is the face full of piss really necessary?
what recommandations for fellatio?
is the face full of piss really necessary?
what recommandations for fellatio?
on G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah
3 Mar 2003, 11:44 AM
you are gay.
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
2 Feb 2003, 3:42 PM
the last line feels jilted of a few beats. other than that--much, much nicer. still sways sing-songily, but is much cleaner.
replying on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
1 Feb 2003, 5:11 PM
well if you prefer mind-numbingly cliched poems, you have come to the right place! may i suggest you start with those named above?
glad i could help you out, old chum!
glad i could help you out, old chum!
replying on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
1 Feb 2003, 8:06 AM
apparently not.
replying on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
31 Jan 2003, 4:29 PM
Other. Yes. Most perspicaciously said, mon frere. Indeed, our end-of-the-month extravaganzas have become legendary, have they not? Did you hear that Tijuana called, and they want us there gor February? I thought not. I told them, no, we were booked in Sao Paulo, and absolutely could not cancel. And then, they brought up the mirkat incident. Shit. What was I supposed to say? So, plans have changed. Times have changed. The answer, my friend, is blowing...well, this is a family network, so I guess I'll keep that one to myself.
replying on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
31 Jan 2003, 4:24 PM
If Woody had gone straight to the police, this would never have happened.
replying on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
31 Jan 2003, 4:23 PM
I have read them all. his angst, while not 'teen' _per se,_ is of the same calibre. By proxy, the Shoe fits.