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Safe haven (Other) by INTRANSIT
Upon entering the bathroom I notice the toilet paper is late. A closet is neatly organized and the door is closed. The basement is never occupied. Probably due to spiders. The coffee table is shin high. I have many broken toes. Fool hardy ways of living in and around a house.

Up the ladder: sic homina ad papyrum
Down the ladder: We be free

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5740
Posted: April 28, 2003 7:31 AM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2003 7:31 AM PDT
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[n/a] JakeBike @ 167.206.181.179 | 28-Apr-03/8:44 AM | Reply
late toilet paper?

did you left-hand it?
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Apr-03/5:18 PM | Reply
That's one way, but i'd end it a bit more 'out to lunch'and deatachable.
"in the dog house" or
With plastic covered furniture"
or
"high on flinstone vitamins". or not.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 28-Apr-03/6:12 PM | Reply
Maybe one more couplet also?
[8] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 29-Dec-20/4:11 PM | Reply
Enjoyed the humor!
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