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Safe haven (Other) by INTRANSIT Upon entering the bathroom
I notice the toilet paper is late.
A closet is neatly organized
and the door is closed.
The basement is never occupied.
Probably due to spiders.
The coffee table is shin high.
I have many broken toes.
Fool hardy ways of living
in and around a house.
Up the ladder:
sic homina ad papyrum
Down the ladder:
We be free
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Posted: April 28, 2003 7:31 AM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2003 7:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5742 Comments:
That's one way, but i'd end it a bit more 'out to lunch'and deatachable.
"in the dog house" or With plastic covered furniture" or "high on flinstone vitamins". or not.
Maybe one more couplet also?
Enjoyed the humor!
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did you left-hand it?