on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon
13 May 2004, 3:00 PM
Sucks to be you. You know. Dead and all.
on A Word by cuddlytiger17
12 May 2004, 6:05 PM
Yea, a little overwritten, but so is almost everything I've ever confined in ink. Still, I like it.
on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17
12 May 2004, 6:02 PM
Perhaps you just got tired of being an enabler? Good job.
replying on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17
12 May 2004, 12:01 AM
What website? and way the by, How old are you? Your interpretations are well thaught out and strike a chord, good job.
replying on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17
11 May 2004, 11:57 PM
If you want to know how much I appreciate it, read my poem "To My Love", It's about to the bottom of my list. I wrote it about ten years ago, Still haven't found it!, Maybe someday...
on Leading To Fatality by cuddlytiger17
10 May 2004, 9:00 PM
Good words,Give it a few years, you might find a good man and a real talent for writing.
on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17
10 May 2004, 8:56 PM
TEEN? That's been a fanta------- O.K. I actually like this, I guess 28 years hasn't been enough growing up for me. But expand n these feelings, It says what you mean, now just find more ways to say it. By the way, how old is your friend Sasha? I'm not afraid to travel!
on As Catullus Said (Updated and Revised) by Sasha
10 May 2004, 8:51 PM
Confucious says:
on selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined
10 May 2004, 8:43 PM
Whatcha on? share?
on Fire of Life by Katzclear
10 May 2004, 8:27 PM
Yes, It's always worth it. Been awhile since I've been here, how ya doin?
on if only i could tell by nolan
9 Apr 2004, 7:52 PM
It sounds as if you are living it, but it seems to be a dreary existance. I like the overall feel of this piece though. A well desaerved 8.
on My Castle by Cougarchic
9 Jan 2004, 1:03 AM
LIGHT.
on Broken Love by Cougarchic
9 Jan 2004, 12:54 AM
Hmm. I've never really felt love, and I thought that was painful, the DESIRE. But I've never had a broken jaw.Owww
on Ode to the Wolf by Cougarchic
9 Jan 2004, 12:50 AM
Yesa, they do have fear, ...
on Drinking and driving by SILYLILGURL
31 Dec 2003, 7:54 AM
Been there, stupidity is pervasive when alcohol is involved. Be more specific, discribe the scene, Mangled metal and broken glass, A pool of blood,
A life gone in a flash.
Screaming sirens pierce the air,
Broken dreams scattered here and there.
I'm not a poet, but something like that.
A life gone in a flash.
Screaming sirens pierce the air,
Broken dreams scattered here and there.
I'm not a poet, but something like that.
on Unchained by Hillarystep
31 Dec 2003, 7:46 AM
I like it, a well written poem, But Seraphic and manic don't seem to fit.
on You tell me by Ariella
31 Dec 2003, 7:41 AM
You can't keep hiding for the rest of your life.
on My friend over there (the Mirror) by reo316
22 Dec 2003, 9:39 PM
Sure they can, you know, they all have their own society on the other side of the glass, when you're not looking they're partying off their ass, Look closer next time.