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Leading To Fatality (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17
I have no clue What to think of you I have no explanation Call it an infatuation I don’t know why I even bother to try I know how it’ll end With a broken heart to mend It doesn’t ever work out I know what it’s about But I still keep trying And keep right on buying Your stupid lines Ignoring all the signs Of an obvious reality Leading to fatality An act of stupidity Ending with humility And another love missed Another person added to my list Of those who've hurt me Those who couldn’t see How simple words that can Supposedly make a man Can also damage a person so much That they withdraw from human touch "I love you" Eight simple letters not ringing true Causing a horrid heart break And a soul struggling to escape One too many mistakes And a life she just couldn’t take.

Up the ladder: Amy
Down the ladder: A Kiss

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.285714
Weighted score: 5.345782
Overall Rank: 3426
Posted: May 10, 2004 12:57 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2004 12:57 PM PDT
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[8] sliver @ 65.178.192.168 | 10-May-04/9:00 PM | Reply
Good words,Give it a few years, you might find a good man and a real talent for writing.
[n/a] cuddlytiger17 @ 64.80.244.106 > sliver | 11-May-04/3:30 PM | Reply
Thank you, and i sure hope so!!! lol.
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