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Fire of Life (Free verse) by Katzclear
-Life is as a burning fire
Giving you only a small time to accomplish something
-What will you do with it?
Toil in pain in learning a lifetime,
only to die, and forget all?
Put soul and heart into working and building,
only to retire, and watch it fall?
-Flames of life leap and dance before your eyes,
Reminding you of how little time you have left.
-Change to make them like you
Only to tear yourself apart?
Hide yourself from the outside world,
Try and cover the bleeding scars?
-The flames of life work deceptively
Luring you in with warmth and light
Once bring you in.... burn...
New Scars
many more times to wound.
Was it worth it
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Weighted score: 5.614723
Overall Rank: 2243
Posted: March 22, 2004 6:15 PM PST; Last modified: March 22, 2004 6:15 PM PST
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