Fire of Life

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Mar 2004 · 3 comments

-Life is as a burning fire Giving you only a small time to accomplish something -What will you do with it? Toil in pain in learning a lifetime, only to die, and forget all? Put soul and heart into working and building, only to retire, and watch it fall? -Flames of life leap and dance before your eyes, Reminding you of how little time you have left. -Change to make them like you Only to tear yourself apart? Hide yourself from the outside world, Try and cover the bleeding scars? -The flames of life work deceptively Luring you in with warmth and light Once bring you in.... burn... New Scars many more times to wound. Was it worth it

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[8] Lifeboatman 22-Mar-04/6:32 PM Reply

-Life as a burning crock of shit.... that is what life is.. but I did like what you were trying to say... nice thoughts... 8

[9] deleted user 22-Mar-04/6:55 PM Reply

Well said. I'd put "they" in "once bring you in" and a ? at the end. And I'd answer yes.

[10] sliver 10-May-04/8:27 PM Reply

Yes, It's always worth it. Been awhile since I've been here, how ya doin?