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Unchained (Free verse) by Hillarystep
Desire unchained A definition please Roused by inamorata's entranced glance Always an omniscient touch and desire's eye Without unstrung harps or broken flutes A Gift offered on passion's unshaven root The booty of rapture's capture A concupiscent urge that beats and taps Raps and taps, urge within surges Surge within urges, penetrates and perjures Beatitude grazes salacious delectation Euphoria is but a moment racing to be met Serene strokes in one moment cherubic and seraphic Whipped, lashed into the unhallowed the infernal and manic Raps and taps, urge within surges Surge within urges, penetrates and perjures Flesh deplete but flame's soul replete One flesh bent over the saddle's ejacked horn The other straddled by languid yawp in splice A sacrifice of love impaled on a root of life

Up the ladder: She wishes
Down the ladder: Grandma's lullaby

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10130
Posted: December 28, 2003 11:53 AM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2003 11:53 AM PST
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[9] sliver @ 63.190.80.47 | 31-Dec-03/7:46 AM | Reply
I like it, a well written poem, But Seraphic and manic don't seem to fit.
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