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Free verse № 78277

Unchained

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Dec 2003 · 1 comment

Desire unchained A definition please Roused by inamorata's entranced glance Always an omniscient touch and desire's eye Without unstrung harps or broken flutes A Gift offered on passion's unshaven root The booty of rapture's capture A concupiscent urge that beats and taps Raps and taps, urge within surges Surge within urges, penetrates and perjures Beatitude grazes salacious delectation Euphoria is but a moment racing to be met Serene strokes in one moment cherubic and seraphic Whipped, lashed into the unhallowed the infernal and manic Raps and taps, urge within surges Surge within urges, penetrates and perjures Flesh deplete but flame's soul replete One flesh bent over the saddle's ejacked horn The other straddled by languid yawp in splice A sacrifice of love impaled on a root of life

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[9] sliver 31-Dec-03/7:46 AM Reply
I like it, a well written poem, But Seraphic and manic don't seem to fit.