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In my palm (Other) by Prince of Void
In my palm My universe seems still pathless In my poem My sense is silently endless In my heart Your face is wordlessly ageless In my dream My soul is timelessly placeless In my wine My love is tranquilly restless In my galaxies The secret of being is mysteriously traceless do you think of it ?

Up the ladder: Grandma's lullaby
Down the ladder: You can seize my smile

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10173
Posted: October 22, 2005 1:33 PM PDT; Last modified: October 22, 2005 1:33 PM PDT
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[5] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 23-Oct-05/5:02 AM | Reply
You're probably too young to know that for one glorious summer the name on everyone's lips was Evan Dando.
[5] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 > zodiac | 24-Oct-05/7:52 PM | Reply
Come on feel The Lemonheads..
[5] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 > wilco | 25-Oct-05/2:33 AM | Reply
I was joking, but now it has hit me that emo fans today probably DON'T know who the Lemonheads, Pixies, Ramones or Moby Grape are. Or that a movie called Reality Bites captured their whole aesthetic the before most of them were even born.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.78.197 > zodiac | 25-Oct-05/2:20 PM | Reply
I'm the child of eternity...I'm too young to know whatever it's facing me like thorough the aesthetic of a shot in Standly Kubrick's movie 2001: a space odyssey...THE MAN IS GOING BEYOND INFINITY

[5] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 > Prince of Void | 26-Oct-05/5:16 AM | Reply
Hey, there was one great fad a couple of years ago that really rocked. It was called Making Sense Occasionally, you should check it out.
[5] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 > zodiac | 26-Oct-05/5:16 AM | Reply
Also, The Jitterbug.
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