Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/8:59 AM
You want I should think you are mean? No way. Not doin' it. Ithink you ARE a nice person, and you save the claws for applicable applications. Your comments I have recieved seem knowledgeable and gentle. However, your underlying "dirtiness" amuses me.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	14-Oct-02/6:42 AM
Quite the impressive piece,sir. Um, my skills are not at this level yet but I tripped over "still feels and think fertile". A typo maybe? I felt the presence of a winery. I enjoy watching you and god's wife banter. It's funny and I learn small things too. Thanks.
Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/6:36 AM
Also P&K, I'm not the bumdoctor, and I'm not frass but it's okay you thought that. I assumed you were a Mr. oTEPdrug at one point but zzinnia quickly corrected me on that. She's a nice lady and I've ignored most of her comments on my work. For this I DAMN MYSELF!
Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/6:24 AM
God's wife, This wasn't meant to be a goof poem as Mr P&K said. In fact this is one of my personal favorites. This poem is a metaphor for finding people who have little or no spark in their lives. We poets have a way of reaching people with a few words and I think our talents have gobs-o-merit in the real world. This is supportive of our craft, sword and shield=pen and pad. We can make people feel pain, pleasure, lonely , happy and we can celebrate things as simple as coffee. Don't worry about being funny, ask P&K and Dark Angel, they'll tell you I'm not ready for playful jousting yet. Thanks, If I can improve on this piece, let me know.
Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/6:13 AM
Dark Angel, I thought your "bumdoctor" haiku was a stab at my generous scoring of other peoples poems. I see now that to be a bad assumtion. Like I said to Mr. P&K, I started to take things a little too seriously here. I welcome your comments, I'll try to lighten up. Thanks, could you comment on my "frozen beauty" haiku, I'm seriously interested in getting it right.
Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-02/6:05 AM
Mr P&K,thank you for your comment, please expound. In ref. to our previous conversation, it appears I have made many foolish assumptions.I welcome comments but have a little trouble differentiating between comments and playful jousting. I also started to take this site and my poetry a little too seriously. I'll try to loosen up in the future, thanks again.
Re: Dying for a Dowry by Blue Magpie	13-Oct-02/6:28 PM
Where did the quote come from? Good work, very serious tone. The truth stings but the solution isn't always easy. I pray,every little bit helps. If you care,9
Re: Just a Girl by w~* ATHENA *~w	13-Oct-02/6:03 AM
I picked up a connection between husband/boyfriend and a newborn. Slightly scary but endearing too.8
Re: a comment on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT	12-Oct-02/5:58 PM
Wow, you've given me pause. I might be able to morph this over to a land/lake "deal" and make it work better. Thanks for pointing that out. It's the scary truth though, isn't it?
Re: Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe	12-Oct-02/1:12 PM
On second thought......
Re: Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe	12-Oct-02/1:11 PM
Goofy n clean fun.
Re: Turquoise by ams	12-Oct-02/1:08 PM
Yeah, but did you learn anything? HA HA. Liked it.8
Re: Recess by horus8	12-Oct-02/1:03 PM
Normally I run and hide from lyrics. I don't want to ruin a musicians piece by saying some thing about something I know nothing about. (That was circular). This piece I liked. Sad but I liked it.9
Re: a comment on can't by nentwined	7-Oct-02/6:27 PM
Well dude, keep on keepin on. Looks like all the "higher ups" have gone or are extremely busy. I guess I need to get busy and move some friggin' cars before they repo my house. Can't help but feel stupid sittin' in a traffic jam in a Car Hauler with a load of 10 on.... Anyway, thanks and catch you on the flip trip:>
Re: can't by nentwined	7-Oct-02/8:19 AM
Hey NEN, dont wanna pitch a bitch but I'm curious as to why some can post moree pieces than others? I think 3 a week is fine considering there are 700 plus on this site now. Just my curiosity and opinion.
Re: a comment on A call to arms by INTRANSIT	7-Oct-02/8:13 AM
Thank you. Ah yes, there are many ways to toussle someones tongue!
Re: The Moment of Elevation by vulcan	7-Oct-02/8:01 AM
Don't know where the quote came from,but it fits. Beautiful.
Re: can't by nentwined	7-Oct-02/5:35 AM
Still at war with the sleep monster I see. If you've got a little writers block, relax, inspiration will find you. In the meantime,hope all is well on the other side of my screen,and you're having sucess with your pets. Thanks for backing PR the way you do:)
Re: a comment on Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville by <~>	6-Oct-02/4:25 PM
I think you're confusing Tennessee with Texas. I'll bet you want some longhorns for your caddy too.
Re: a comment on Fueled hearts by INTRANSIT	6-Oct-02/8:11 AM
Well then, I apologize to Mr. oTEPdrug. Apparently I'm trying to see how many times I can step on my tongue here. I'm doing a pretty good job too, I think.