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A call to arms (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Poets!! Arise!! Take up sword and shield and address those closest you! Go into the dead! Shake them awake and make then ask"why". Stab at their funny bone! Humor them and tickle their feet and tongue! Knock them asunder! Kick their shins and heads and roll them in verbage! Cut them in half! Grab their stomach in one hand and heart in t'other and show them themselves! Once you have done this , tend to them, and nurture them and create an army....

Up the ladder: Sadness
Down the ladder: Francis' Self-portrait

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7575
Posted: October 6, 2002 4:20 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2002 4:20 PM PDT
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[8] Amelia @ 198.146.139.61 | 7-Oct-02/7:58 AM | Reply
Unexpectedly Nice, the tongue though seems well...
you tickle your feet with your hand and you toussle your tongue with a tongue.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > Amelia | 7-Oct-02/8:13 AM | Reply
Thank you. Ah yes, there are many ways to toussle someones tongue!
[6] Jill Stockinger @ 127.0.0.1 | 1-Jan-21/10:54 AM | Reply
you meant: make them ask why (typo on them)

Silly!
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