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The Moment of Elevation (Free verse) by vulcan This"Under the glaucous caverns of old ocean"
This,this shall break my heart ere the daybreak,
But that we break together O heart
The Sublimity of Man and Nature!
Up the ladder:
The Wind
Down the ladder:
ex mas
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Posted: October 6, 2002 11:48 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 3:48 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.95 Overall Rank: 8984 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46
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7-Oct-02/8:01 AM
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Don't know where the quote came from,but it fits. Beautiful.
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vulcan @ 80.242.3.95
> INTRANSIT
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7-Oct-02/8:05 AM
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It's from Shelley's "Prometheous Unbound"and if you care to know I was listening to Brukner's Symphony no8's finale when I reached that line!(if I was alone some tragedy might have followed!)
I liek the idea of the union of Man and Nature even in destruction. That is truly Shelleyan. You do capture the Romantics very well.
I like that this is so compact, my only complaint is the use of archaic language. More of a personal preference.
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