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Free verse № 18993

The Moment of Elevation

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Oct 2002 · Edited 7 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

This"Under the glaucous caverns of old ocean" This,this shall break my heart ere the daybreak, But that we break together O heart The Sublimity of Man and Nature!

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[8] INTRANSIT 7-Oct-02/8:01 AM Reply
Don't know where the quote came from,but it fits. Beautiful.
[n/a] vulcan › INTRANSIT 7-Oct-02/8:05 AM Reply
It's from Shelley's "Prometheous Unbound"and if you care to know I was listening to Brukner's Symphony no8's finale when I reached that line!(if I was alone some tragedy might have followed!)
[8] Christof 17-Oct-02/5:57 AM Reply
I liek the idea of the union of Man and Nature even in destruction. That is truly Shelleyan. You do capture the Romantics very well.
[7] deleted user 1-Nov-02/7:17 PM Reply
I like that this is so compact, my only complaint is the use of archaic language. More of a personal preference.