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The Wind (Free verse) by Reuben Spiteri
Carrying notes of Mystery Blowing an army of sand As if it is looking For a lost Friend Carrying Beams of Heat After freezing all the air Every day, every night Bringing balance, being fair Carrying the stillness of the night Bringing out Divine Truth The Wind was my root Helping me grow Divine Fruit
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.9
Weighted score: 4.95
Overall Rank: 8978
Posted: September 30, 2002 1:17 PM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 1:17 PM PDT
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[6] harrytuttle @ 208.20.220.69 | 1-Oct-02/9:18 AM | Reply
I like the rythm of this (kinda like the wind - hey, cool!)
[8] vulcan @ 80.242.3.81 | 8-Oct-02/12:33 AM | Reply
the first stanza is marvelous beautiful!what a rhythmic Spirit you possess!7/8
[8] Sigh'ense... @ 66.214.46.106 | 11-Oct-02/7:43 PM | Reply
Deep.
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