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ex mas (Free verse) by flatliner
Bring on Christmas I'm waiting the tube is on to tell me. The nog and rum is in and I'm jingling, I hear bells. I've got the spirits, they're going down as fast as I can pour em. Let me ride the sleigh tonight I have reservations, but I'll do it anyway. Santa Claus is comming, and it ain't to town. no mas.. no mas.. ex mas..

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.9
Weighted score: 4.95
Overall Rank: 8985
Posted: December 11, 2002 9:11 PM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2002 9:11 PM PST
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[8] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 | 12-Dec-02/11:29 AM | Reply
something strangely enduring about this piece of donkey spittle. keep it up or
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