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February (Haiku) by BenRice
February runoff Burbles under veils of ice. Winter hides its joy.
Up the ladder: ex mas
Down the ladder: Liberal's Lament, 2003
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.9
Weighted score: 4.95
Overall Rank: 8986
Posted: December 17, 2002 11:25 PM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2002 11:25 PM PST
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Dec-02/7:27 PM | Reply
i know iknow, do one called February forever, and make it about(you're never gonna believe, this) cold weather mixed with emotion.
[8] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > horus8 | 18-Dec-02/7:51 PM | Reply
no. march is next, h:

march

swept clean, up starts grow
through melt and mud: daffodils
laugh, yellow and green


[n/a] BenRice @ 63.118.10.146 > horus8 | 9-Mar-06/1:19 PM | Reply
I know, how about you go read up on the traditional haiku form.
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