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The Moment of Elevation (Free verse) by vulcan

This"Under the glaucous caverns of old ocean" This,this shall break my heart ere the daybreak, But that we break together O heart The Sublimity of Man and Nature!

ThreeLittleBears 1-Nov-02/7:17 PM
I like that this is so compact, my only complaint is the use of archaic language. More of a personal preference.




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