Re: a comment on Sonnet for a Suicide by <~>	30-Jul-03/6:26 AM
busted. cool custom job though. did you see this? or hear it in the news.
Re: a comment on Middleman by INTRANSIT	30-Jul-03/6:21 AM
ok, waaaaaay too simple of an answer from you. feeling okay?
Re: a comment on Too obvious by INTRANSIT	30-Jul-03/6:20 AM
Yes, it's also the plague of Wile E. Coyote too.
Re: a comment on Too obvious by INTRANSIT	30-Jul-03/6:18 AM
like I'm really taking this one seriously. Dar... Pardon me. Mr Gayness should have done it. But white is not his gig. Dig?
Re: Sonnet for a Suicide by <~>	30-Jul-03/6:08 AM
Did you tamper with the rhyme scheme? I know of two types of sonnetts and this doesn't fit either.
Re: a comment on Too obvious by INTRANSIT	30-Jul-03/6:04 AM
I just couldn't resist when no one else had done it. maybe I should try harder. lol
Re: Seeing Clearly in the Dark by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/5:55 AM
The bad news: S-3 I don't like. S-1 curdling sky/clear sky. keep the curdling. overall, a bit too much. overdone. The good news: You are tucked under a swans wing. paddle gently. listen to her rhythm. she will share her feathers. best of luck.
Re: Beauty within by geewhiz1962	30-Jul-03/5:44 AM
It may be pimply around the edges, it's almost spot on in rythm and has a mature message. there's potential here.
Re: DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos	30-Jul-03/5:42 AM
lol
Re: The Longest Wait (Revised) by Caducus	30-Jul-03/5:39 AM
Um, Caducus? You feelin' okay man? The last few poems have a down beat to them.
Re: a comment on After seven days in the sun by <~>	29-Jul-03/6:40 AM
LOL that's it! we're boxin' on this disney thing. Thanks for the pick-me-up. I'll be laughing at this all day.
Re: a comment on After seven days in the sun by <~>	29-Jul-03/6:28 AM
I meant poetically. Though I have gained so much ground due to the 'ranker and all involved. But,I think, it may not be me. ya know?
Re: After seven days in the sun by <~>	29-Jul-03/6:18 AM
I'm somewhere between lost and found at the corner of walk and don't walk.
Re: Some die waiting, or laugh forgetting by Shardik	29-Jul-03/6:16 AM
You and that other chick have already conquered the day. It's only 8 a.m.
Re: a comment on Middleman by INTRANSIT	28-Jul-03/6:46 AM
Thanks, man. Not sure what you mean by #4.
Re: a comment on Middleman by INTRANSIT	28-Jul-03/6:45 AM
I trimmed some fat. I had to keep "whispered" it has specific value as it is about real people. wanting what you cant have. Ihave dirty feet too. we all do.
Re: Colgate & Paper towels by Bachus	27-Jul-03/9:57 AM
Bangin' on the belt.
Re: CrapBeer by DurtKL	27-Jul-03/9:54 AM
I hang with the Canadian crew meself.
Re: Departing Suburbia by Caducus	27-Jul-03/9:48 AM
Sorry, I was a little un-sober during my last comment. Not always a good thing. I particularly liked the just above freezing temp. Choosing to keep things "fluid". If only punching grandfather clocks would do the trick, eh?
Re: Departing Suburbia by Caducus	26-Jul-03/5:52 PM
But hey, if you've got six pack abs, you're good to go right? right? Fine job pardno. Good to see you're still pluggin'