| Re: Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8 |
7-Aug-03/5:27 AM |
They say living well is the best revenge.
Today is your day bro.
Tonight is your night bro.
Happy 29!!
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| Re: epicentre by richa |
6-Aug-03/7:26 AM |
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I'm going to rifle through your files for a little while. Your average is very consistent. I find that fascinating for some reason. This is excellent btw.
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| Re: a comment on He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz |
5-Aug-03/8:10 PM |
Thats right! You'll be buried under enormous piles of CURDS!!!
That's right! I said CURDS!!! By the way, has anyone seen my curds? I thought I left them on the credenza next to my cufflinks.
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| Re: The Longest Wait (Revised) by Caducus |
5-Aug-03/4:31 PM |
I prefer your closing line because it seems (she) was a lover or girlfriend. and you're going home to silence or the lack of a second body. I think Zs suggestion would lead me to think "mother".
Croupier? absolutely.
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| Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
5-Aug-03/4:20 PM |
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Pinkmeister, This does have potential. It NEEDS to drop the (sentence) structure. and it reepats itself for an ending. It's good to play poet. It's better to back it up with some work.
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| Re: a comment on I, criminal by INTRANSIT |
4-Aug-03/5:29 PM |
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posession, ownership of the poem. can you clarify that a little please?
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| Re: a comment on I, criminal by INTRANSIT |
4-Aug-03/3:43 PM |
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If I put as much energy into my poetry as I do making a living..... Maybe a definition of ownership might help.
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| Re: a comment on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Aug-03/2:01 PM |
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eww! gross!!! wash it off first!!!
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| Re: Satyrs and fluting the teachers by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Aug-03/2:00 PM |
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| Re: Satyrs and fluting the teachers by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Aug-03/1:58 PM |
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I, unfortunately, am not the powers that be. Otherwise I'd hand you your poetryc diploma and kick your fucking ass off poemranker!!!!
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| Re: Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Aug-03/1:30 PM |
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Hi there! I'm an Apteryx. A wingless bird with hairy feathers! How may I be of assistance?
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| Re: a comment on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit |
3-Aug-03/3:40 PM |
No. I was just making comment that I can identify with the taking care of someone whose health is ailing towards death.
I'll not jump in the middle again. My apologies, sir.
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| Re: a comment on Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit |
3-Aug-03/5:17 AM |
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I can't say that my mothers death was quite as ugly. But I know renal failure IS.
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| Re: Lethal Weapon by poetandkonwit |
2-Aug-03/6:14 PM |
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poetand KOnwit? Boy, I can't wait to see THIS smackdown.
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| Re: We'll be Louvers and shade by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
31-Jul-03/5:29 PM |
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sit down. you're gonna pull something.
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| Re: a comment on I, criminal by INTRANSIT |
31-Jul-03/3:08 PM |
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| Re: a comment on I, criminal by INTRANSIT |
31-Jul-03/12:56 PM |
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Would you happen to know where I might be able to find a first generation Mazda Rx-7 in need of some tlc?
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| Re: Snake Oil: A Deadication by OneFingerAnswer |
31-Jul-03/9:16 AM |
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Loved it! I usually give folks th pinkie. I don't care enough to send the very best.
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| Re: a comment on How it should have happened by INTRANSIT |
30-Jul-03/6:19 PM |
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If you are referring to the "keep on keepin' on" phrase, No. I don't hang with any particular "crowd". Yes I'm aware that this sucks. It's my first formal attempt at sex poetry and went horribly limp. to say the least. I should just stay away from this topic poetically . Thanks for your time.
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| Re: a comment on Sonnet for a Suicide by <~> |
30-Jul-03/7:52 AM |
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it's not supposed to be this way.
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