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13-Nov-03/2:14 PM |
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Thank god I'm barely smart enough to avoid the late night lacquer asses. I like it better when you rhyme.
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14-Nov-03/1:11 PM |
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I believe you and richa have out grown this place.
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14-Nov-03/4:22 PM |
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good. number one. where you belong.
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| Re: Gen. Rockman & his dirt encrusted clicker brigade by Y2kSlamPoet |
15-Nov-03/8:56 AM |
Unfortunately I was unaware of the voting war that was taking place and I inadvertently added to the melee.
I zapped myself a blue zero and a blue four and richa a blue 10 because I honestly belive his poetry right now is better than the two I have on the top list. I am guilty as charged!!!!
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15-Nov-03/12:47 PM |
Christ! I'm guilty of that too? I hate being human.
Nice big words. very cool.
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| Re: A Coven of Toes by sixtoedwonder |
15-Nov-03/12:49 PM |
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hope you're not superstitious. funny.
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| Re: My daddy taught me about being a good sport by horus8 |
16-Nov-03/8:59 AM |
Yes, Iknow. Accepted. This is the game you do best. This poem, right here. play ball.
Hows the acting going anyway? New leads?
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16-Nov-03/9:40 AM |
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Maybe it's not you. See stanza two. Lesser company? As in lesser people? Or you wining solo.
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| Re: I AM... by CHUNMOON |
16-Nov-03/9:52 AM |
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yes, no need to shout. 6. show more/ tell less. create some new meatphors.
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| Re: Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus |
16-Nov-03/10:01 AM |
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This is exactly why we like zinnias. they are a hearty flower that can survive winters. And they return to grace us with their beauty every spring. A tree does not hibernate. It improves its root structure during the down season. Just focus on your balcony. All is well in nature.
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16-Nov-03/10:26 AM |
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Like you really need mor accolades here. Kool-aid maybe. No. Calling someone a goob, and getting away with it? THAT'S Kool.
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16-Nov-03/10:37 AM |
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Topic-10. Rhythm-4. Poetic beauty-3. 5.5 Rounding up.
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16-Nov-03/11:03 AM |
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If i havn't suggested it already, Poetry for dummies is an excellent tool. not that what you've written is bad, more tools will make it better.
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| Re: The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
16-Nov-03/1:12 PM |
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very funny you hooven hooker you. it's good to be hooven. people like hooven animals. as opposed to hoover ones. Ha!
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| Re: The Balcony Boys by Shardik |
17-Nov-03/6:39 AM |
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I have seen, tho' never been to, this Wild Goose you speak of. Will there be more of this story? I hope so.
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| Re: You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik |
17-Nov-03/6:52 AM |
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You are by far, the most interesting single serving person I have ever met. Did I say single serving? I meant Full course meal. With a backup bus of Disco retards. Full boat.
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| Re: Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz |
17-Nov-03/6:54 AM |
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Nah. shorten it to a villanelle for more punch. Judy.
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17-Nov-03/4:32 PM |
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| Re: Truth by eyrbare |
17-Nov-03/4:40 PM |
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Actually, do you know what you have here? A factually accurate peek at how humans grow when things turn "cold". Don't touch it.
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17-Nov-03/4:51 PM |
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Sliver, I know we all write below our capabilities to some degree, however, I really think you should be about 1.5 steps ahead of this. I'm gonna e-mail you.
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