on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 2:14 PM
Thank god I'm barely smart enough to avoid the late night lacquer asses. I like it better when you rhyme.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 1:11 PM
I believe you and richa have out grown this place.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 4:22 PM
good. number one. where you belong.
on Gen. Rockman & his dirt encrusted clicker brigade by Y2kSlamPoet
15 Nov 2003, 8:56 AM
Unfortunately I was unaware of the voting war that was taking place and I inadvertently added to the melee.
I zapped myself a blue zero and a blue four and richa a blue 10 because I honestly belive his poetry right now is better than the two I have on the top list. I am guilty as charged!!!!
I zapped myself a blue zero and a blue four and richa a blue 10 because I honestly belive his poetry right now is better than the two I have on the top list. I am guilty as charged!!!!
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2003, 12:47 PM
Christ! I'm guilty of that too? I hate being human.
Nice big words. very cool.
Nice big words. very cool.
on A Coven of Toes by sixtoedwonder
15 Nov 2003, 12:49 PM
hope you're not superstitious. funny.
on My daddy taught me about being a good sport by horus8
16 Nov 2003, 8:59 AM
Yes, Iknow. Accepted. This is the game you do best. This poem, right here. play ball.
Hows the acting going anyway? New leads?
Hows the acting going anyway? New leads?
on some deleted poem
16 Nov 2003, 9:40 AM
Maybe it's not you. See stanza two. Lesser company? As in lesser people? Or you wining solo.
on Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus
16 Nov 2003, 10:01 AM
This is exactly why we like zinnias. they are a hearty flower that can survive winters. And they return to grace us with their beauty every spring. A tree does not hibernate. It improves its root structure during the down season. Just focus on your balcony. All is well in nature.
on some deleted poem
16 Nov 2003, 10:26 AM
Like you really need mor accolades here. Kool-aid maybe. No. Calling someone a goob, and getting away with it? THAT'S Kool.
on some deleted poem
16 Nov 2003, 10:37 AM
Topic-10. Rhythm-4. Poetic beauty-3. 5.5 Rounding up.
on some deleted poem
16 Nov 2003, 11:03 AM
If i havn't suggested it already, Poetry for dummies is an excellent tool. not that what you've written is bad, more tools will make it better.
on The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos
16 Nov 2003, 1:12 PM
very funny you hooven hooker you. it's good to be hooven. people like hooven animals. as opposed to hoover ones. Ha!
on The Balcony Boys by Shardik
17 Nov 2003, 6:39 AM
I have seen, tho' never been to, this Wild Goose you speak of. Will there be more of this story? I hope so.
on You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik
17 Nov 2003, 6:52 AM
You are by far, the most interesting single serving person I have ever met. Did I say single serving? I meant Full course meal. With a backup bus of Disco retards. Full boat.
on Anonymous Voters Of Zeros by scitz
17 Nov 2003, 6:54 AM
Nah. shorten it to a villanelle for more punch. Judy.
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2003, 4:32 PM
rockmaaaage......
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2003, 4:51 PM
Sliver, I know we all write below our capabilities to some degree, however, I really think you should be about 1.5 steps ahead of this. I'm gonna e-mail you.