| Re: A girl named Chuck by Shardik |
18-Nov-03/7:53 AM |
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Almost Dark Angelican. I think you could add to this. if you wanted.
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| Re: Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Nov-03/8:04 AM |
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Wait, I'll get my wallet. What are the current shares at?
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18-Nov-03/12:31 PM |
what? no pantoum? and yet more homework for me.
S-5 L-3 missing an -o-?
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| Re: Being by horus8 |
18-Nov-03/3:05 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
18-Nov-03/6:03 PM |
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| Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus |
18-Nov-03/6:10 PM |
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| Re: Captured Moment by hummers86 |
18-Nov-03/6:24 PM |
I suggest you read: A cup of tea & some company- By Cadacus
And: Fair 12s' new post.
Then RUN back to the Mall of america from whence you came!!!
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| Re: The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa |
19-Nov-03/6:11 AM |
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I like the write. Don't like the topic. You seem to do haikus well.
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| Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus |
19-Nov-03/6:38 AM |
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Damian Hurst? Archaeology? Can you help me refine my search sir?
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| Re: Fallow by <~> |
19-Nov-03/8:51 AM |
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| Re: Mirror to Mirror by Roisin |
19-Nov-03/9:17 AM |
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| Re: null by Bill Z Bub |
19-Nov-03/12:46 PM |
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is poemranker confused? or has some fusible link fried?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Nov-03/6:07 AM |
Honestly, this doesn't come across as a poem, to me. Not that common ground is, it readsmore like a novel.
I did enjoy the read and how organized it is.
My beef: The mirroring boner. Seems out of place.
Or I missed the whole point entirely? still, quite tall.
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| Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii |
20-Nov-03/6:12 AM |
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awfully close to perfect.
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| Re: What I know of monsters by Bachus |
20-Nov-03/6:16 AM |
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You know where the problems lie, In the poem. I feel for you bro. I really do.
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| Re: A Parable Of War by Caducus |
21-Nov-03/5:23 AM |
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Best war poem I've read in a while. Your development becomes you.
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| Re: Earth, or, When You Take Me From This Good Rich Soil by david |
21-Nov-03/5:33 AM |
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The only thing I don't like about this is its' quasi-repetetive nature. I thumbed through your file. Write more please.
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| Re: Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare |
21-Nov-03/8:31 AM |
yes. Also: when the ache of ancestors happens before death, cattyness can be cancelled and life dictated, instead.
bravo.
P.S. Sorry to lead you on. I'm no collegiate.
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| Re: The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll by CouchPotato |
22-Nov-03/10:07 AM |
Spun me right round with the bobble -head and couch potato theme. almost passed you up.
intelligently wacky.
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| Re: I have thirteen knives, and a sore riddled Black pussy by horus8 |
22-Nov-03/4:02 PM |
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Jesus has retractable thums and will use them to carry you by your head, thumbs in ears, then retract, and send you dripping, tripping singing, wheeling, reeling, into the sunken bucket to sink into the blackest of cherry red pimentos where you will die from the salt having absorbed your bodily fluids leaving you as thin as a shaven fingernail nerve.
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