on A girl named Chuck by Shardik
18 Nov 2003, 7:53 AM
Almost Dark Angelican. I think you could add to this. if you wanted.
on Spuna by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Nov 2003, 8:04 AM
Wait, I'll get my wallet. What are the current shares at?
on some deleted poem
18 Nov 2003, 12:31 PM
what? no pantoum? and yet more homework for me.
S-5 L-3 missing an -o-?
S-5 L-3 missing an -o-?
on some deleted poem
18 Nov 2003, 6:03 PM
No arguements here.
on A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus
18 Nov 2003, 6:10 PM
Champion.
on Captured Moment by hummers86
18 Nov 2003, 6:24 PM
I suggest you read: A cup of tea & some company- By Cadacus
And: Fair 12s' new post.
Then RUN back to the Mall of america from whence you came!!!
And: Fair 12s' new post.
Then RUN back to the Mall of america from whence you came!!!
on The Turner Prize by Mona Lisa
19 Nov 2003, 6:11 AM
I like the write. Don't like the topic. You seem to do haikus well.
on A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus
19 Nov 2003, 6:38 AM
Damian Hurst? Archaeology? Can you help me refine my search sir?
on Mirror to Mirror by Roisin
19 Nov 2003, 9:17 AM
All green.
on null by Bill Z Bub
19 Nov 2003, 12:46 PM
is poemranker confused? or has some fusible link fried?
on some deleted poem
20 Nov 2003, 6:07 AM
Honestly, this doesn't come across as a poem, to me. Not that common ground is, it readsmore like a novel.
I did enjoy the read and how organized it is.
My beef: The mirroring boner. Seems out of place.
Or I missed the whole point entirely? still, quite tall.
I did enjoy the read and how organized it is.
My beef: The mirroring boner. Seems out of place.
Or I missed the whole point entirely? still, quite tall.
on Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii
20 Nov 2003, 6:12 AM
awfully close to perfect.
on What I know of monsters by Bachus
20 Nov 2003, 6:16 AM
You know where the problems lie, In the poem. I feel for you bro. I really do.
on A Parable Of War by Caducus
21 Nov 2003, 5:23 AM
Best war poem I've read in a while. Your development becomes you.
on Earth, or, When You Take Me From This Good Rich Soil by david
21 Nov 2003, 5:33 AM
The only thing I don't like about this is its' quasi-repetetive nature. I thumbed through your file. Write more please.
on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare
21 Nov 2003, 8:31 AM
yes. Also: when the ache of ancestors happens before death, cattyness can be cancelled and life dictated, instead.
bravo.
P.S. Sorry to lead you on. I'm no collegiate.
bravo.
P.S. Sorry to lead you on. I'm no collegiate.
on The Mystery of My Bobble Headed Doll by CouchPotato
22 Nov 2003, 10:07 AM
Spun me right round with the bobble -head and couch potato theme. almost passed you up.
intelligently wacky.
intelligently wacky.
on I have thirteen knives, and a sore riddled Black pussy by horus8
22 Nov 2003, 4:02 PM
Jesus has retractable thums and will use them to carry you by your head, thumbs in ears, then retract, and send you dripping, tripping singing, wheeling, reeling, into the sunken bucket to sink into the blackest of cherry red pimentos where you will die from the salt having absorbed your bodily fluids leaving you as thin as a shaven fingernail nerve.