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Captured Moment (Free verse) by hummers86
Walking along the collage of colors
I notice the enticement of aromas
Reemploying reminiscences
They are greatly accepted by ovations
Time is a standstill
And life an incessant thrill
Nothing can vanquish
Everything else must relinquish
Longing to linger this feeling
One will try all blocking
An entity to be cherished
And constant till accomplished
While this warmth must go
The recollection forever stowed,
For another time later
When it will be remembered
Just as before
Again it beats at the door
Drawn by its allure
Ecstasy comes forevermore, forevermore
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Posted: November 18, 2003 6:19 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2003 6:19 PM PST
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And: Fair 12s' new post.
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