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Free verse № 75932

Captured Moment

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

Walking along the collage of colors I notice the enticement of aromas Reemploying reminiscences They are greatly accepted by ovations Time is a standstill And life an incessant thrill Nothing can vanquish Everything else must relinquish Longing to linger this feeling One will try all blocking An entity to be cherished And constant till accomplished While this warmth must go The recollection forever stowed, For another time later When it will be remembered Just as before Again it beats at the door Drawn by its allure Ecstasy comes forevermore, forevermore

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[n/a] INTRANSIT 18-Nov-03/6:24 PM Reply
I suggest you read: A cup of tea & some company- By Cadacus
And: Fair 12s' new post.

Then RUN back to the Mall of america from whence you came!!!
[n/a] INTRANSIT › INTRANSIT 18-Nov-03/6:25 PM Reply
Caducus.
[7] Fearlesfan_04 24-Feb-05/7:04 PM Reply
Great theme