on Islands Of Our King by Caducus
23 Nov 2003, 11:02 AM
Gads! I do say 'ol chap. You seem to be quite the runner at present.
on Murder means oil for Bush's coffer by DreamerSupreme
23 Nov 2003, 11:07 AM
Grrrr. This is well done, but, I am qite tiring of the war theme. Maybe I'm tiring of the war.>.<
Where is -=Dark_Angel=- to alleviate this stress?
Where is -=Dark_Angel=- to alleviate this stress?
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2003, 11:09 AM
Rondine, Rondeau.
Two for show
I'm ready to go
Always like a good ride.
Two for show
I'm ready to go
Always like a good ride.
on Mecca was mud in my backyard by Y2kSlamPoet
23 Nov 2003, 11:13 AM
Curses! Foiled again! this is much better than what i wrote about my mom.
on Punchlining the opposition (Waltz with the inquisition) by SupremeDreamer
23 Nov 2003, 11:16 AM
I'd like to see this one perfomed open mic.
on some deleted poem
23 Nov 2003, 3:59 PM
hate to be blunt here, i think it's overdone. :(
no vote
no vote
on some deleted poem
24 Nov 2003, 6:18 AM
Poetry for dummies. get a copy soon.
on An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485
24 Nov 2003, 6:26 AM
A big box of mumbo-jumbo. If dug into, sorted and organized, a poem can be had. Find more nasty effects of the tea. tea is bad. tea is bad. show me why. don't just say "it eats brain cells" do some research.
on How to audition for a cereal ad by horus8
24 Nov 2003, 4:30 PM
The milk was cold and deep, wasn't it? and you thought you would be speaking. lol.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2003, 5:37 AM
I don't know why you went lyric with this it's a fine poem, though bumpy in spots. Old tip. Read it aloud or have someone read it to you, the bumps will pop up like a weed through pavement.
My archives are all back, take a peek at The catamaran.
and......
My archives are all back, take a peek at The catamaran.
and......
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2003, 11:36 AM
actions speak better than words. always have. always will.
And I have now rendered all poetry, moot.
And I have now rendered all poetry, moot.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2003, 11:43 AM
Mrs. Hare,
First of all, my apologies if you are not a Mrs. Secondly, I have re-vamped the intersection poem and would appreciate your thoughts on it. If you would like my thoughts on -Reap-, I will be happy to oblige.
Thank you for your time.
intransit.
First of all, my apologies if you are not a Mrs. Secondly, I have re-vamped the intersection poem and would appreciate your thoughts on it. If you would like my thoughts on -Reap-, I will be happy to oblige.
Thank you for your time.
intransit.
on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
25 Nov 2003, 7:29 PM
beautiful funny nonsense. and what of your screen play? my hooven brother.
on untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote
25 Nov 2003, 7:48 PM
Well, They seem to say the same thing, one and two.
Save two for something else. The animals don't strike quite the chord themusical terms do.
Save two for something else. The animals don't strike quite the chord themusical terms do.
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2003, 7:56 PM
yes , and how does one get bad poets to stop writing?
kill them? help them? write about them? what would martini and rossi say about this?
kill them? help them? write about them? what would martini and rossi say about this?
on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer
26 Nov 2003, 6:03 AM
Like Bruce Lee jumping out of a cherry blossom.
on I told Mr. Haiku that actions speak louder than words by Y2kSlamPoet
26 Nov 2003, 6:05 AM
...here's your sign.....
on some deleted poem
23 Dec 2003, 5:28 AM
L-14 I'm floating blind. I get it. I just don't like the way it hits my ears for some reason. Excellent variation from traditional sonnets. 9.99
on some deleted poem
29 Dec 2003, 3:27 PM
Spot on. and hilarious.