| Re: Islands Of Our King by Caducus |
23-Nov-03/11:02 AM |
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Gads! I do say 'ol chap. You seem to be quite the runner at present.
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| Re: Murder means oil for Bush's coffer by DreamerSupreme |
23-Nov-03/11:07 AM |
Grrrr. This is well done, but, I am qite tiring of the war theme. Maybe I'm tiring of the war.>.<
Where is -=Dark_Angel=- to alleviate this stress?
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23-Nov-03/11:09 AM |
Rondine, Rondeau.
Two for show
I'm ready to go
Always like a good ride.
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| Re: Mecca was mud in my backyard by Y2kSlamPoet |
23-Nov-03/11:13 AM |
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Curses! Foiled again! this is much better than what i wrote about my mom.
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| Re: Punchlining the opposition (Waltz with the inquisition) by SupremeDreamer |
23-Nov-03/11:16 AM |
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I'd like to see this one perfomed open mic.
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23-Nov-03/3:59 PM |
hate to be blunt here, i think it's overdone. :(
no vote
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24-Nov-03/6:18 AM |
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Poetry for dummies. get a copy soon.
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| Re: An Anti-Tea campaign of 2020 by ShaNoN+960317485 |
24-Nov-03/6:26 AM |
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A big box of mumbo-jumbo. If dug into, sorted and organized, a poem can be had. Find more nasty effects of the tea. tea is bad. tea is bad. show me why. don't just say "it eats brain cells" do some research.
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| Re: How to audition for a cereal ad by horus8 |
24-Nov-03/4:30 PM |
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The milk was cold and deep, wasn't it? and you thought you would be speaking. lol.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Nov-03/5:37 AM |
I don't know why you went lyric with this it's a fine poem, though bumpy in spots. Old tip. Read it aloud or have someone read it to you, the bumps will pop up like a weed through pavement.
My archives are all back, take a peek at The catamaran.
and......
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Nov-03/11:36 AM |
actions speak better than words. always have. always will.
And I have now rendered all poetry, moot.
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25-Nov-03/11:43 AM |
Mrs. Hare,
First of all, my apologies if you are not a Mrs. Secondly, I have re-vamped the intersection poem and would appreciate your thoughts on it. If you would like my thoughts on -Reap-, I will be happy to oblige.
Thank you for your time.
intransit.
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| Re: Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
25-Nov-03/7:29 PM |
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beautiful funny nonsense. and what of your screen play? my hooven brother.
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| Re: untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote |
25-Nov-03/7:48 PM |
Well, They seem to say the same thing, one and two.
Save two for something else. The animals don't strike quite the chord themusical terms do.
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25-Nov-03/7:56 PM |
yes , and how does one get bad poets to stop writing?
kill them? help them? write about them? what would martini and rossi say about this?
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| Re: Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer |
26-Nov-03/6:03 AM |
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Like Bruce Lee jumping out of a cherry blossom.
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| Re: I told Mr. Haiku that actions speak louder than words by Y2kSlamPoet |
26-Nov-03/6:05 AM |
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23-Dec-03/5:28 AM |
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L-14 I'm floating blind. I get it. I just don't like the way it hits my ears for some reason. Excellent variation from traditional sonnets. 9.99
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29-Dec-03/3:27 PM |
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| Re: The wise by richa |
29-Dec-03/3:33 PM |
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of course? off course? When I tie in the title , it works. I think you can shuffle the 3rd stanza and lose the ( of course). Beautiful. as if I had expected less.
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