Lyric № 76059
Blessing in desguise
And if I could become a man
One that above this world would stand
Above my fears my broken tears
Above the taunting of my peers
And what then would I come to know
If pain in life could never show
Then would I feel emotion true
Or would emotions grow askew?
Itâs pain that makes us who we are
And keeps our minds from drifting far
Away from nature now our own
Yet close to things, to us, unknown
Now, on occasion we must see
That pain does make us what we be
It keeps us human in our minds
And whispers to us sweet reminds
It keeps with us a feeling real
Of happiness and times ideal
And keeps a faith we tend to lose
When first our soul does start to bruise
So heed my words and do not block
Those times when pain finds you to mock
Just think of greater times ahead
Once this new pain you have then shed
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The poem...
"It keeps us human in our minds
And whispers to us sweet reminds" is very nice
"Then would I feel emotion true
Or would emotions grow askew?" is a not so nice (*very*) difficult to pull off questions, especially in first person).
As a lyric is flows along well enough with the usual disclaimers, but i think you might be better served to make the same observations from another perspective and make it a poem.
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-zarina
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