on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
9 Nov 2003, 6:24 AM
For the record, I don't agree with deleting comments. And I don't agree with your wings either. This cut SOUNDS perfect to me and I followed it easily. I think the problem with the springs was you were trying/thinking about compression springs versus extension springs. The only extension springs I can think of are on screen doors and engine throttles. Both bad Ideas for a poem.
on Leg humping is back on the menu by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Nov 2003, 6:32 AM
I think the moon was jewish last night. What is the difference between being a racist and having a "severe distaste" for a peoples? Thank you. My eyes are bleeding now. No vote. Well written, however I got nothing from this one. shoot me.
on some deleted poem
9 Nov 2003, 6:54 AM
You almost had me with the sodium chloride. Legumes? Beans? Huh? What if I'm a lefty? Will the recipie not work?
on Greybie Blue by abecedarian
9 Nov 2003, 7:30 AM
Fuckin' perfect.
on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined
10 Nov 2003, 6:23 AM
Call me wierd. I like it as is. It makes sense to me. It's just a request from a reader to a poet for some things. It works. But I don't like (dribble) . trickle , maybe. Dribble makes me think of infirm people.
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2003, 6:52 AM
If ever there was a writ that captured the pen-poking-temple activities of us young pens, this is it.
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2003, 12:24 PM
Nice flip!!! Gawd that's funny!
on God Save The King by Caducus
12 Nov 2003, 6:00 AM
I don't suppose you or I or rockmage, have any Ideas as how to end the war? Well, here's mine. Jam the airlines with americans, hundreds of thousands, send them to Iraq wearing t-shirts that say: I know this war is not going to help, how can I? Or something similar. I know, stupid, radical crazy. Let's spitball.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 6:04 AM
I hope that's not really her I dea of love. I smell a little sage.
on Me and my 'ompanion by ShaNoN+960317485
12 Nov 2003, 7:04 AM
Walt Whitman fantasizing he's straight and dildoing a girl? What?????? 7 for the strange factor.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 8:19 AM
Great Idea posting against itself! I'm a bit of a traditionalist so I like the first better. I like the second also. It reads a bit like a riddle, therefore, 9
on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
13 Nov 2003, 5:39 AM
Sorry nen, this feels forced. Or maybe I'm a simpleton.
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 5:45 AM
You can get three minutes out of this? More please.
on Count Spatula by Bachus
13 Nov 2003, 1:20 PM
Not in my dish machine you don't!!!
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 1:27 PM
move (blind) to the end of the preceding stanza. Grass fingers? Or sun fingers?
A reach, maybe, make the narrarator the grass/nature?
or talk more about the fox club. It feels as if the welcome you got was cold. Perfect start i think.
A reach, maybe, make the narrarator the grass/nature?
or talk more about the fox club. It feels as if the welcome you got was cold. Perfect start i think.
on What the fuck is a HAIKU anyway? by titan69
13 Nov 2003, 1:49 PM
The internet has GOBS of samples. Look around.
Do you always stutter? writes
Do you always stutter? writes
on Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings by scitz
13 Nov 2003, 1:56 PM
Capitalize protean? Marshmallow has to go. It's too young. Beyond those, RRRRRoll'em!
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 2:07 PM
are farcicles found in the frozen dessert aisle? are they eaten by Gary Larson?
Cows skip. Don't they?
Cows skip. Don't they?
Go for 8 syllables per line. Good story. Bumpy rhyme.
Do what it deserves.