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Haiku № 74922

Crampa

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Nov 2003 · Edited 12 Nov 2003 · 3 comments

Puke hangs from his beard He fixed the shower curtain, but died on the pot.

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[10] INTRANSIT 12-Nov-03/6:51 PM Reply
If I hadn't witnessed my own mothers untimely demise due to renal failure, I'd say: Huh? Like every other time. squeak squeak squeak.
[9] NoSage 12-Nov-03/7:14 PM Reply
Sounds like a whiskey drinker. sad. I like the haiku tho.
[7] capachijim 18-Nov-03/3:37 PM Reply
ick -7-