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Crampa (Haiku) by horus8
Puke hangs from his beard He fixed the shower curtain, but died on the pot.

Up the ladder: With Old Light
Down the ladder: Solitude

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.7647057
Weighted score: 6.554348
Overall Rank: 641
Posted: November 12, 2003 6:40 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2003 6:50 PM PST
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[10] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 12-Nov-03/6:51 PM | Reply
If I hadn't witnessed my own mothers untimely demise due to renal failure, I'd say: Huh? Like every other time. squeak squeak squeak.
[9] NoSage @ 65.178.224.45 | 12-Nov-03/7:14 PM | Reply
Sounds like a whiskey drinker. sad. I like the haiku tho.
[7] capachijim @ 24.168.26.48 | 18-Nov-03/3:37 PM | Reply
ick -7-
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