Truth

by eyrbare

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Nov 2003 · 6 comments

Truth is like a violet leaf Hidden in the summer heat, Coming to color in the brisk, autumn air.

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[7] sliver 17-Nov-03/3:16 PM Reply

This is the closest one to a poem, I still need to read one more of yours.Somewhat thought provoking. I shall bestow an seven

[7] richa 17-Nov-03/3:46 PM Reply

The leaf is not violet to start with. Not being violet it is hidden (but how does heat hide). Comes to colour in autumn. We see it.

This I think is the only way it makes sense but it is not the obvious interpretation.

Also it is a million miles from my own understanding of truth.

Other than that............

not bad.

[10] INTRANSIT 17-Nov-03/4:40 PM Reply

Actually, do you know what you have here? A factually accurate peek at how humans grow when things turn "cold". Don't touch it.

[n/a] eyrbare › INTRANSIT 17-Nov-03/8:31 PM Reply

Thanks for the great comment!

[10] INTRANSIT › eyrbare 18-Nov-03/7:49 AM Reply

Finish your website!!! U.W. Barron county eh? Kenosian myself.
We'll be expecting more from you.

[n/a] eyrbare › INTRANSIT 18-Nov-03/8:02 PM Reply

Thanks a bunch! Especially great to here comments from a fellow UWer. My website is a continous project; it shall never be completely finished. But I hope to be adding more of my work(s) later. =)