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Truth (Other) by eyrbare

Truth is like a violet leaf Hidden in the summer heat, Coming to color in the brisk, autumn air.

richa 17-Nov-03/3:46 PM
The leaf is not violet to start with. Not being violet it is hidden (but how does heat hide). Comes to colour in autumn. We see it.

This I think is the only way it makes sense but it is not the obvious interpretation.

Also it is a million miles from my own understanding of truth.

Other than that............

not bad.




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