| Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere |
21-Apr-05/3:23 PM |
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I like the spuds at the end. just potatoes/ just desserts. cool.
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| Re: Prickly Pear by Dovina |
22-Apr-05/1:41 PM |
I thought about p/p when I wrote my villanelle. I .just couldn't get it to work.
Is this zodiac? Or our very own Browne recluse?
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22-Apr-05/1:47 PM |
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Move on to bigger and better things will ya! My inferiority is flaring again. gish.
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| Re: standing outside the door by nentwined |
22-Apr-05/1:51 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Apr-05/7:39 PM |
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| Re: Grandma and Grandpa by jessicazee |
3-May-05/2:29 PM |
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The annual Oshkosh fly-in? Just wondering.
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| Re: Actor by horus8 |
3-May-05/2:29 PM |
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Sorry we couldn't meet fer a minute while I was out there. Bidness is bidness, right?
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| Re: PLEASE VOTE FOR MELANIE by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
5-May-05/2:41 PM |
" Stop reading Calvin Trillin"
poetandknowit
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| Re: Old Friend by Dovina |
8-May-05/8:58 AM |
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Interesting. Starting out with a playful rhyme and then it gets all serious. I don't think it does the pet justice, though. do it again.
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8-May-05/9:03 AM |
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Initially , I think the last stanza can be better. I'll be home in about 6 days. I'll come back to it.
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| Re: Panama by Dovina |
8-May-05/9:09 AM |
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dAAmnit girl! Um, this isn't people , is it? I can't wait to get home whee i'll have time to THINK!
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9-May-05/9:58 AM |
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8s and 9s? you gotta be kidding me. heck even i gave myself the four. HA!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-May-05/10:07 AM |
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I was in Seattle and tried to see the local poetry scene. It was under reconstrution. #*@%$** it!
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| Re: Man Enough For Me by mystic enoch |
11-May-05/5:04 PM |
It's me! I'm here!
Nope. My shoe's untied.
I guess I'm
disqualified.
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| Re: Mid Years by Dovina |
11-May-05/5:18 PM |
I knew that. I'll be posting a beeg wun monday morning. Make sure you have a comic book in your shorts.
It's gonna be Krrraken.
I'm.....al...most.....home....erghk.
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| Re: My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee |
11-May-05/5:20 PM |
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I'm sure it reads fast for a reason but it also reads like a list. Take some 120 grit to it.
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| Re: dit da haiku by nentwined |
15-May-05/7:09 PM |
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| Re: Old Lady and The Sea by Joe-joe |
16-May-05/8:52 AM |
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Are you trying for a sonnet? Look at Beam Reach and compare it to The Catamaran. Both are mine, the catamaran being the first draft. You can hear the diff easily. " A comrade of the yawning deep " is excellent. 8. Hit it again.
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| Re: On the Bank of Lake Michigan by jessicazee |
16-May-05/8:58 AM |
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But what I really whant to know is: are you Hagarian or Rothian?
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| Re: "Monco" (In progress) by Alizarin_Crimson |
16-May-05/9:13 AM |
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The wavering oboe went Star-warsy on me for some reason. Cardboeard ghosttown/saturated survival rock.
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