on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere
21 Apr 2005, 3:23 PM
I like the spuds at the end. just potatoes/ just desserts. cool.
on Prickly Pear by Dovina
22 Apr 2005, 1:41 PM
I thought about p/p when I wrote my villanelle. I .just couldn't get it to work.
Is this zodiac? Or our very own Browne recluse?
Is this zodiac? Or our very own Browne recluse?
on some deleted poem
22 Apr 2005, 1:47 PM
Move on to bigger and better things will ya! My inferiority is flaring again. gish.
on standing outside the door by nentwined
22 Apr 2005, 1:51 PM
Deca- dence.
on some deleted poem
23 Apr 2005, 7:39 PM
I agree. I'm Impressed.
on Grandma and Grandpa by jessicazee
3 May 2005, 2:29 PM
The annual Oshkosh fly-in? Just wondering.
on PLEASE VOTE FOR MELANIE by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
5 May 2005, 2:41 PM
" Stop reading Calvin Trillin"
poetandknowit
poetandknowit
on some deleted poem
9 May 2005, 10:07 AM
I was in Seattle and tried to see the local poetry scene. It was under reconstrution. #*@%$** it!
on some deleted poem
9 May 2005, 9:58 AM
8s and 9s? you gotta be kidding me. heck even i gave myself the four. HA!
on Old Friend by Dovina
8 May 2005, 8:58 AM
Interesting. Starting out with a playful rhyme and then it gets all serious. I don't think it does the pet justice, though. do it again.
on some deleted poem
8 May 2005, 9:03 AM
Initially , I think the last stanza can be better. I'll be home in about 6 days. I'll come back to it.
on Man Enough For Me by mystic enoch
11 May 2005, 5:04 PM
It's me! I'm here!
Nope. My shoe's untied.
I guess I'm
disqualified.
Nope. My shoe's untied.
I guess I'm
disqualified.
on My Best Friend, 1985 by jessicazee
11 May 2005, 5:20 PM
I'm sure it reads fast for a reason but it also reads like a list. Take some 120 grit to it.
on dit da haiku by nentwined
15 May 2005, 7:09 PM
S.O.S.
on Old Lady and The Sea by Joe-joe
16 May 2005, 8:52 AM
Are you trying for a sonnet? Look at Beam Reach and compare it to The Catamaran. Both are mine, the catamaran being the first draft. You can hear the diff easily. " A comrade of the yawning deep " is excellent. 8. Hit it again.
on "Monco" (In progress) by Alizarin_Crimson
16 May 2005, 9:13 AM
The wavering oboe went Star-warsy on me for some reason. Cardboeard ghosttown/saturated survival rock.
on On the Bank of Lake Michigan by jessicazee
16 May 2005, 8:58 AM
But what I really whant to know is: are you Hagarian or Rothian?