Comments byINTRANSIT, 361–380 back. Include replies

on Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus 17 May 2005, 12:19 PM
What, may I ask, birthed the Idea for this poem?
I am not the giver of the anal retentive 5.
on some deleted poem 16 May 2005, 9:18 AM
And another poet I have to hate due to quality issues of mine.
on The Observer by Jeremi B. Handrinos 16 May 2005, 9:22 AM
You owe me two bucks for using my Rabbit hole. I'll take a discount on your book.
on wretched by Dental Panic 16 May 2005, 3:34 PM
Judging by the quality of the poem, I'd say the only defect is the title. Welcome. keep your head about you.
Some carry Louisville Sluggers. Others, X-ray machines.
on I sat beside the night by Niphredil 16 May 2005, 7:15 PM
I read them all. Have my rights as a human being been revoked? It sure feels like it.
on some deleted poem 16 May 2005, 6:35 PM
You forgot -spiff.
on dit da haiku by nentwined 16 May 2005, 7:04 PM
glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time.

look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
on Learning to Drive by jessicazee 17 May 2005, 12:00 PM
But are you Rothian or, Hagarian?
on Untitled by camperdfl 25 May 2005, 2:43 PM
Make the punch-line punchier. Otherwise, a good way to practice the damnable sonnet.
on Get well soon by Hallmark 17 May 2005, 12:13 PM
OREGANO!!!
on Finding Gin and Santa by richa 25 May 2005, 2:48 PM
I forgot to come back to this. I'm waggin'!
on some deleted poem 18 May 2005, 6:01 PM
I'm confused as to if someone made it through or didn't. I love -pebble-. And I I could use -Portend- as well as you use the funny word, I might be good.
on visitor by Dental Panic 18 May 2005, 6:05 PM
Echos of my Poem on a face. But MUCH better.
on Just a perfect day (Haiku) by ingwa 18 May 2005, 6:08 PM
Works for me.
on Talia Eternal by Enkidu 19 May 2005, 6:56 PM
I can't get over -birds of down-. Incredible.
on some deleted poem 19 May 2005, 7:03 PM
Coin toss called on account of rain.
on I Remembered, Upon Waking by Alizarin_Crimson 20 May 2005, 6:37 AM
Have an Alexander Hamilton.
on The Jesus Belt by Caducus 25 May 2005, 2:53 PM
I like this but I feel like a dunce for not knowing who "she" -is. Honestly I think the psuedo-rhyme hurts it.
on From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8 25 May 2005, 7:32 AM
Too funny!
on Swoon by Dovina 25 May 2005, 3:17 PM
Well, I can't say that I could write romantic poetry near as well, as I'm from the "other side of the tracks".

Thank god I wear a tea cozy. And I ordered a new one in Naugahyde , with a sea-shell veil. That's right. Surf and turf headwear.