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16-May-05/9:18 AM |
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And another poet I have to hate due to quality issues of mine.
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| Re: The Observer by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
16-May-05/9:22 AM |
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You owe me two bucks for using my Rabbit hole. I'll take a discount on your book.
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| Re: wretched by Dental Panic |
16-May-05/3:34 PM |
Judging by the quality of the poem, I'd say the only defect is the title. Welcome. keep your head about you.
Some carry Louisville Sluggers. Others, X-ray machines.
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16-May-05/6:35 PM |
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| Re: dit da haiku by nentwined |
16-May-05/7:04 PM |
glad to see your dad pop in and out from time to time.
look at the inversion dad pop. hmmmm.
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| Re: I sat beside the night by Niphredil |
16-May-05/7:15 PM |
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I read them all. Have my rights as a human being been revoked? It sure feels like it.
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| Re: Learning to Drive by jessicazee |
17-May-05/12:00 PM |
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But are you Rothian or, Hagarian?
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| Re: Get well soon by Hallmark |
17-May-05/12:13 PM |
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| Re: Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus |
17-May-05/12:19 PM |
What, may I ask, birthed the Idea for this poem?
I am not the giver of the anal retentive 5.
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18-May-05/6:01 PM |
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I'm confused as to if someone made it through or didn't. I love -pebble-. And I I could use -Portend- as well as you use the funny word, I might be good.
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| Re: visitor by Dental Panic |
18-May-05/6:05 PM |
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Echos of my Poem on a face. But MUCH better.
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| Re: Just a perfect day (Haiku) by ingwa |
18-May-05/6:08 PM |
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| Re: Talia Eternal by Enkidu |
19-May-05/6:56 PM |
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I can't get over -birds of down-. Incredible.
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19-May-05/7:03 PM |
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Coin toss called on account of rain.
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| Re: I Remembered, Upon Waking by Alizarin_Crimson |
20-May-05/6:37 AM |
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Have an Alexander Hamilton.
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| Re: From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8 |
25-May-05/7:32 AM |
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| Re: Untitled by camperdfl |
25-May-05/2:43 PM |
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Make the punch-line punchier. Otherwise, a good way to practice the damnable sonnet.
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| Re: Finding Gin and Santa by richa |
25-May-05/2:48 PM |
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I forgot to come back to this. I'm waggin'!
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| Re: The Jesus Belt by Caducus |
25-May-05/2:53 PM |
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I like this but I feel like a dunce for not knowing who "she" -is. Honestly I think the psuedo-rhyme hurts it.
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| Re: Swoon by Dovina |
25-May-05/3:17 PM |
Well, I can't say that I could write romantic poetry near as well, as I'm from the "other side of the tracks".
Thank god I wear a tea cozy. And I ordered a new one in Naugahyde , with a sea-shell veil. That's right. Surf and turf headwear.
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