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Untitled (Sonnet) by camperdfl
After you declared me to be a theif I plotted on taking your life I wanted to crush you like a dry leaf Because you initiated this strife After I said I didn't take your stuff You said what I was saying was a lie You confronted me acting really tough All I could think were ways for you to die I dream'd of gutting you like a pig As I visualized seeing you in pain Or may'be snapping you like a twig Sometimes I feel a little inhumane I had violent visions of your death I wanted to watch you breathe your last breath.

Up the ladder: Pennies
Down the ladder: Little Tub of Joy

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.3333335
Overall Rank: 3493
Posted: May 23, 2005 8:13 PM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2005 8:13 PM PDT
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[3] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 24-May-05/11:29 AM | Reply
Yes, sweet retribution. Kill him, that'll fix the matter.
[4] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.100.67 | 25-May-05/2:43 PM | Reply
Make the punch-line punchier. Otherwise, a good way to practice the damnable sonnet.
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