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Untitled (Sonnet) by camperdfl
After you declared me to be a theif
I plotted on taking your life
I wanted to crush you like a dry leaf
Because you initiated this strife
After I said I didn't take your stuff
You said what I was saying was a lie
You confronted me acting really tough
All I could think were ways for you to die
I dream'd of gutting you like a pig
As I visualized seeing you in pain
Or may'be snapping you like a twig
Sometimes I feel a little inhumane
I had violent visions of your death
I wanted to watch you breathe your last breath.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.3333335
Overall Rank: 3492
Posted: May 23, 2005 8:13 PM PDT; Last modified: May 23, 2005 8:13 PM PDT
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