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Sonnet № 125282

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Member since 2004 · Posted 23 May 2005 · 2 comments

After you declared me to be a theif I plotted on taking your life I wanted to crush you like a dry leaf Because you initiated this strife After I said I didn't take your stuff You said what I was saying was a lie You confronted me acting really tough All I could think were ways for you to die I dream'd of gutting you like a pig As I visualized seeing you in pain Or may'be snapping you like a twig Sometimes I feel a little inhumane I had violent visions of your death I wanted to watch you breathe your last breath.

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[3] Dovina 24-May-05/11:29 AM Reply
Yes, sweet retribution. Kill him, that'll fix the matter.
[4] INTRANSIT 25-May-05/2:43 PM Reply
Make the punch-line punchier. Otherwise, a good way to practice the damnable sonnet.