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Man Enough For Me (Other) by mystic enoch
Love to me is a lifelong thing, From a young girl thoughts To an old widows dreams. I long for a man I will totally adore. A man with no compassion must hit the door. A man who is not afraid between the sheets. If your sex is lame,you must hit the streets. A good strong heart and a level head, Who knows his life path and wont do wrong instead. With a body that kills and a voice so sweet. Make any grown woman fall off her feet. Lord knows a sense of humor is a must. Thoughts so keen that leaves them in the dust. A proper fellow who knows how to wine and dine. Yet a heart so pure it is truly divine. Everyday bring to the table a proper feast. Help clean up after and offer me a treat. A man who spends time with his child. Brings it up right so it wont act wild. Before he comes to the door dust the world off his feet. Looks me in the eyes like when we first meet. A man that always has a surprise in store. if you dont have this in you then dont knock on my door.


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9840
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2005 3:19 PM PDT
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[4] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.228.254 | 11-May-05/5:04 PM | Reply
It's me! I'm here!
Nope. My shoe's untied.
I guess I'm
disqualified.
[7] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 7-Mar-06/3:05 PM | Reply
You're looking for an IKEA flat-packed, six-packed, self-assemble insta-chap. Sadly they went off the production line shortly after market research revealed that they didn't actually exist. Scientific theory now suggests that you go for a slightly more tricky option and grow one. You don't have to grow him from scratch, but even the finest specimen requires a little personal cultivation. It might not be quick and convenient, but I'm sure it'll be more rewarding in the long run.
We're not all totally useless though, honest.
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