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i am probably on my 7th shot of vodka (Free verse) by tralala42001 it is the time in which everyone
rests their bodies
and only the insane are awake
it is the time when the drunks
begin to pass out on the curb
or with their next object of instant gratification
it is the time in which
i awaken with a comforting
touch on my breast
Up the ladder:
Crappy
Down the ladder:
wretched heart-wrench
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Posted: January 10, 2004 1:39 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2004 1:39 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.904638 Overall Rank: 9842 Comments:
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richa @ 81.178.214.114
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11-Jan-04/12:13 PM
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Not bad this, a bit short. Not enough for me to know what you mean by 'comforting touch on my breast' - is it sarcastic? I'm thinking so or do you like strangers? they are a stranger right?
ha ha ha ha lol. This is some retarded whore shit right here. You're probably on your 7th cock sandwich too. it is the time to see the gynocologist fucking bivulvanating trollip. lol. I'll give a three for making me chuckle though. You've obviously never been to the big city doll. they do this 24-7, it's always the time. This sounds like some shit my rank mother would write before squatting on a donkey for a line of coke.
ugh...not your best. if you had read this, you probably would have made it more interesting in revision. if you did read it...why didn't you delete it?
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