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i am probably on my 7th shot of vodka (Free verse) by tralala42001

it is the time in which everyone rests their bodies and only the insane are awake it is the time when the drunks begin to pass out on the curb or with their next object of instant gratification it is the time in which i awaken with a comforting touch on my breast

MacFrantic 1-Feb-07/7:55 PM
ugh...not your best. if you had read this, you probably would have made it more interesting in revision. if you did read it...why didn't you delete it?




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