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i am probably on my 7th shot of vodka (Free verse) by tralala42001

it is the time in which everyone rests their bodies and only the insane are awake it is the time when the drunks begin to pass out on the curb or with their next object of instant gratification it is the time in which i awaken with a comforting touch on my breast

richa 11-Jan-04/12:13 PM
Not bad this, a bit short. Not enough for me to know what you mean by 'comforting touch on my breast' - is it sarcastic? I'm thinking so or do you like strangers? they are a stranger right?




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