| Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
11-Mar-05/11:30 AM |
I put it back because it is hard to believe that in the entire history of poetry that every single poem that ever went to print was one hundred percent grammatically correct. If that was actually the case, there would be no poetry. It would all be newspaper articles. Therefore, I have ruled on the aforementioned request and I therefore rule:
I rule.
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| Re: Oceans love song by Stacy Stewart |
11-Mar-05/11:35 AM |
"like an imprint of perfection burned inside my soul"
don't like it. I think you can do better. I also don't like the closing lines. I think they can go. But that's just opinion.
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
20-Mar-05/4:24 PM |
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i think I did a deep scan of this the first time. This time I swam in it. angry dust. perfect. 100. again.
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| Re: What I Exist For by Dovina |
3-Apr-05/3:07 PM |
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sappy or not, it works. have another
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| Re: A Taste of Rose by Richard |
3-Apr-05/3:20 PM |
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I'll try to get back to this one, first read ...7.5
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| Re: Arab Shepherd (a belief poem for Dovina) by zodiac |
6-Apr-05/1:45 PM |
Public or private, quite good.
I have never seen a pillar of salt
unless it was
contained.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Apr-05/3:29 PM |
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Aye! The Maggian strikes again! First thing I got was a Venus flytrap. Too long away from home I guess. lol.
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| Re: Reincarnation by Dovina |
16-Apr-05/3:32 PM |
When I get home, we'll get jiggy with this Irish thing eh? Greetings from Pecos Texas or....
how-DEA!
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| Re: I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
16-Apr-05/3:37 PM |
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I can't bite at the moment, I'm liking the current.
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| Re: believing by whispern_smoke_wisp |
16-Apr-05/3:41 PM |
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(sees the hitchhiker and goes for the next gear up.)
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| Re: Semen Quasi-Sonnet by Sashaclese |
16-Apr-05/3:43 PM |
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16-Apr-05/6:03 PM |
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Racist!!! wiggety white guys. lol. you used -brick- twice. Better than MY beat poem was.
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| Re: Requiem for Faith by James Rykelangeli |
16-Apr-05/6:07 PM |
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I didn't like -azure-. otherwise, it raged like king kong.
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| Re: Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry |
17-Apr-05/12:49 PM |
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I actually get the feeling that it's a small boy watching his older brother with a pencil and paper while he himself draws with a crayon next to him, thinking about how the future will/might unfold. Both boys are young 6/8 maybe. I really like this. upgraded.
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| Re: We Were Burnouts by jessicazee |
17-Apr-05/12:56 PM |
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I like it but I can't seem to make the dead mans curve in it. I may be too slow at the wheel today.
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| Re: Sudden Change by Dovina |
20-Apr-05/7:21 AM |
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Paul, of Le Bible, No? Been to Dallas. Then Houston. Now Amarillo, going to Seattle. Phew! i'm beat.
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| Re: ab*defg by Goad |
20-Apr-05/7:27 AM |
Wrapped for my protection. Ha! I needed a good laugh.
two full hands.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Apr-05/7:30 AM |
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I see a female(?) scuba diver and a shipwreck? 9
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| Re: Hamlet's Horniness by Sashaclese |
20-Apr-05/7:38 AM |
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| Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ |
20-Apr-05/7:44 AM |
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I begin to stupify. ruh. Please add me to the list of Damien haters. Thank you.
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