on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
20 Mar 2005, 4:24 PM
i think I did a deep scan of this the first time. This time I swam in it. angry dust. perfect. 100. again.
on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
11 Mar 2005, 11:30 AM
I put it back because it is hard to believe that in the entire history of poetry that every single poem that ever went to print was one hundred percent grammatically correct. If that was actually the case, there would be no poetry. It would all be newspaper articles. Therefore, I have ruled on the aforementioned request and I therefore rule:
I rule.
I rule.
on Oceans love song by Stacy Stewart
11 Mar 2005, 11:35 AM
"like an imprint of perfection burned inside my soul"
don't like it. I think you can do better. I also don't like the closing lines. I think they can go. But that's just opinion.
don't like it. I think you can do better. I also don't like the closing lines. I think they can go. But that's just opinion.
on What I Exist For by Dovina
3 Apr 2005, 3:07 PM
sappy or not, it works. have another
on A Taste of Rose by Richard
3 Apr 2005, 3:20 PM
I'll try to get back to this one, first read ...7.5
on Arab Shepherd (a belief poem for Dovina) by zodiac
6 Apr 2005, 1:45 PM
Public or private, quite good.
I have never seen a pillar of salt
unless it was
contained.
I have never seen a pillar of salt
unless it was
contained.
on some deleted poem
16 Apr 2005, 3:29 PM
Aye! The Maggian strikes again! First thing I got was a Venus flytrap. Too long away from home I guess. lol.
on Reincarnation by Dovina
16 Apr 2005, 3:32 PM
When I get home, we'll get jiggy with this Irish thing eh? Greetings from Pecos Texas or....
how-DEA!
how-DEA!
on I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Apr 2005, 3:37 PM
I can't bite at the moment, I'm liking the current.
on believing by whispern_smoke_wisp
16 Apr 2005, 3:41 PM
(sees the hitchhiker and goes for the next gear up.)
on Semen Quasi-Sonnet by Sashaclese
16 Apr 2005, 3:43 PM
Semi-queasy son-not.
on some deleted poem
16 Apr 2005, 6:03 PM
Racist!!! wiggety white guys. lol. you used -brick- twice. Better than MY beat poem was.
on Requiem for Faith by James Rykelangeli
16 Apr 2005, 6:07 PM
I didn't like -azure-. otherwise, it raged like king kong.
on Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry
17 Apr 2005, 12:49 PM
I actually get the feeling that it's a small boy watching his older brother with a pencil and paper while he himself draws with a crayon next to him, thinking about how the future will/might unfold. Both boys are young 6/8 maybe. I really like this. upgraded.
on We Were Burnouts by jessicazee
17 Apr 2005, 12:56 PM
I like it but I can't seem to make the dead mans curve in it. I may be too slow at the wheel today.
on Sudden Change by Dovina
20 Apr 2005, 7:21 AM
Paul, of Le Bible, No? Been to Dallas. Then Houston. Now Amarillo, going to Seattle. Phew! i'm beat.
on some deleted poem
20 Apr 2005, 7:30 AM
I see a female(?) scuba diver and a shipwreck? 9
on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
20 Apr 2005, 7:44 AM
I begin to stupify. ruh. Please add me to the list of Damien haters. Thank you.
on Hamlet's Horniness by Sashaclese
20 Apr 2005, 7:38 AM
THAT'S entertainment.